by Darkniciad
Love the way you write, always keeps me on the edge of my seat.
Another great installment please keep em coming.
no more Anonymous comments from me..
Another great addition to the ongoing story. Definitely still one of my favorite stories on lit.
Hah, the deities intervening was a nice touch,
and a solution I hadn;t come up with when trying to think the story onwards.
More and more it gets clear that you have a great storyline for us, making it even more fun waiting and then reading the next part...
Yay! to you!
Cheers
-Shaya
Dammit!
I was about to go to bed for some much needed sleep. and then you came up with that cliffhanger!
You're just too good!