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One and a half hours later, in their new apartment, Jason exploded into his mother's mouth. His head fell back on the pillows. Down by his pelvis, he heard Leanne chuckling. The laughter built, so he sat up to see her. Her eyes opened as the joke, whatever it was, passed. Some of his semen glistened on her face in the moonlight.
He stroked her auburn hair. "What's so funny?"
Still giggling, she answered, "Oh, a lady has her secrets."
"Um. Okay."
Her soft brown eyes opened upon him. They flashed with lust. "But I'll tell you, baby." She rose to her knees and pushed him onto his back. "You keep putting into me -- working on us." She straddled his head and sat on his chest. Her gaze descended past her rising breasts and flat stomach, past the bare bulge of her pelvis to his wide eyes. "I'll tell you everything." She spun around, nearly kneeing Jay in the head, so she could look across his body. "I will always let you in. You can have access to all your mother's secrets."
As she lowered her smooth groin and round ass onto her son's face, she heard him sigh. "Now this feels like home."
- COMMENTS
I thought this was a great story. The reason for the different women was explained in a way that made good sense. The mom sounded like a knock out (I've always loved red hair) and the other ladies sounded nice as well. Story had a good ending as well. Ya done good!!
Two wonderful comments about 5 months apart. So great! Thanks so much!
I can see that you have been a happy reader of mine since the beginning. It means a great deal to me. I hope I can finish my current piece one day (I’ve got a beginning, middle, and end. But there’s still a lot missing before it can even be called a completed rough draft.)
Thank you for your warm comments. Thank you for your thanks.
re. your questions: I don’t have a clear answer for most of them. I don’ t think Jason would end up pressing charges against Pat. I feel that Betty and Leanne’s friendship would continue in a new – less close/deep – form. They are farther apart, geographically, and further apart, emotionally. There is little to no chance of Betty learning the “big secret” (assuming that’s the new nature of Leanne & Jason’s relationship.) I’d say it’s a coin toss whether they moved to a new town after Jay’s graduation. They could make it work either way. Re. The last hole: They would certainly get to it once things are settled and calmer.
Keep reading, enjoying, and commenting!
O.F.
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Glad you loved it!
Yeah, Betty doesn't get to go off the deep end. I can't see her in bed with Leanne. Their friendship just doesn't swing that way.
I'm not against writing three-ways, per se (see Finding Our Way Ch. 05 Epilogue for an example.) But all three need to have a reason for being there, and I just don't see either of the Halidays feeling that need.
Perhaps Finding Our Way Ch. 05 Epilogue can help scratch the itch, though!
Happy reading!
O.F.
Wonderful job! Someday, you might revisit this couple. I am curious if Jason pressed charges against Pat the pig and did Nora leave him? I hope that Betty and Leanne can continue their friendship, will Betty ever learn the big secret? Once Jason has graduated, did they stay in town or did they move away? And when did Jason final take Leanne's last hole? (You hinted at it twice...). 5 *'s for both Part I and II.
I’m so glad I discovered your work. You are an absolute master at showing the deep love only a mother and son can share. Thank you!
Many thanks for the prologue. Since cheating is what i hate most of all i didnt read this story.
My deepest thanks to Ryk L. It is incredibly satisfying to see that you connected so much with my story. I hope/trust that you will connect with most if not all of my other stories. Being compared to R.A. Heinlein is high praise indeed! Regarding new pieces, I think I can finally say that something new is finally on the way… in the next few weeks, I’m pretty sure. I believe I’m on the final pass or two of polishing the damned thing ;)
I hope to see your comments on the next one!
O.F.
Beautifully well written story. All major characters developed in breadth and depth. Plots were logically constructed and developed. Probably one of the best constructed incestuous love stories I have read. The emotional, mental, and sexual growth of the mother was believable. The development of her inner strength, her acceptance of her self-awareness/ego, and her acceptance of the chemistry between herself and her son was exactly what I believe a real-life incestuous relationship would mirror, The son's maturity, sensitivity to his mother's needs, his adoration of her, and his passion to satisfy the emotional, sexual and human needs was wonderfully expressed. This is a 5-star series which I wish the author would continue.