All Comments on 'Skin in the Game Pt. 02'
by onlyfiction
- 18 Comments
I really like your writing style. What i like best about your stories is that they all have their own unique scenes and dialogue, no copy and pasted scenes from your other stories.
Fantastic story, I am in awe of your talent and imagination. I wonder though with all the women he came in will any of them show up pregnant? Love to read more of this story if you feel so inclined. Thank you
Thanks so much for your warm comment. Yes, I have started working on a new story, though I do not expect it to be ready for submission any time soon. I suppose most of us writers try to keep each story fresh and original, but eventually patterns will show up if you read enough from one writer. In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed the story (stories.)
Best wishes,
OF
Frankie,
I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much. You're in awe? I'm in gratitude that you spent the time and energy to send your praise my way. It makes a big difference to my productivity; a powerful motivator!
Pregnancy has never been a kink of mine, so don't hold your breath waiting for any baby bumps in my stories.
Skin in the Game was conceived (little pregnancy pun there) as a two part story. So I don't have any plans for a part three, though if someone sends me an idea that clicks in my brain I suppose it could happen.
Thanks again for the encouragement!
O.F.
It has been quite the roller-coaster. The story was both hot and fun to read as it was deep and thoughtful. I haven't had su a great read regarding erotica in a long time. And it helped that the writer took its time to properly develop the story and its characters. All in all, 5 out of 5, no question whatsoever. Again, thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. I am already looking forward to check what you have in store for us readers next. I'll patiently wait for that. ^__^
I just want to complement you OF on the fantastic story I have just read. I really like the romantic incest stories especially ones of mother and son. I like the way you work the story so you felt like you were one of the characters. Being male I naturally related to the hero in your story. You remind me of one of my favorite science fiction authors Robert Heinlein. He was able to do that with his stories. You drew me in to the story effortlessly. One of my fetishes is that the son is bigger and can out perform the father. I know I am rambling a lot but I’m not a talented writer like you are, so it takes me a while to get my thoughts out. So I want to thank you for this fantastic story. I am looking forward to reading your other works. Naturally I’m giving you 5 stars. You said you have other works in mind I hope they are posted soon. Keep up the good work you are surely appreciated.
Thanks for your kind praise. I'm glad that you got so much out of this piece. Yes, I'm hard at work finishing up a new standalone story. Looking for editors, in fact. :)
I've seen you loyally post comments on so many stories, and I'm always happy to read your responses to mine.
Thanks again!
O.F.
Bravo!!!!! Loved it, but was hoping a threeway with betty was gonna happen.
This is one of the hottest, most engaging, sexy, thoughtful stories I have read in a while. From the start of his hot mother catching him banging on her best friend to her facilitating the other hook-ups to finally understanding why she was so mad, this has been quite the engaging story. Thank you. I remember reading finding our way back when I first found literotica and throughly enjoying that story. All of your stories have (to me) the right mix of tease, understanding, sexual undertones, etc. But this story is my favorite of them all. Thank you for your craftsmanship to writing erotica Mother/Son stories! 5 stars!
Beautifully well written story. All major characters developed in breadth and depth. Plots were logically constructed and developed. Probably one of the best constructed incestuous love stories I have read. The emotional, mental, and sexual growth of the mother was believable. The development of her inner strength, her acceptance of her self-awareness/ego, and her acceptance of the chemistry between herself and her son was exactly what I believe a real-life incestuous relationship would mirror, The son's maturity, sensitivity to his mother's needs, his adoration of her, and his passion to satisfy the emotional, sexual and human needs was wonderfully expressed. This is a 5-star series which I wish the author would continue.
My deepest thanks to Ryk L. It is incredibly satisfying to see that you connected so much with my story. I hope/trust that you will connect with most if not all of my other stories. Being compared to R.A. Heinlein is high praise indeed! Regarding new pieces, I think I can finally say that something new is finally on the way… in the next few weeks, I’m pretty sure. I believe I’m on the final pass or two of polishing the damned thing ;)
I hope to see your comments on the next one!
O.F.
Many thanks for the prologue. Since cheating is what i hate most of all i didnt read this story.
I’m so glad I discovered your work. You are an absolute master at showing the deep love only a mother and son can share. Thank you!
Wonderful job! Someday, you might revisit this couple. I am curious if Jason pressed charges against Pat the pig and did Nora leave him? I hope that Betty and Leanne can continue their friendship, will Betty ever learn the big secret? Once Jason has graduated, did they stay in town or did they move away? And when did Jason final take Leanne's last hole? (You hinted at it twice...). 5 *'s for both Part I and II.
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Glad you loved it!
Yeah, Betty doesn't get to go off the deep end. I can't see her in bed with Leanne. Their friendship just doesn't swing that way.
I'm not against writing three-ways, per se (see Finding Our Way Ch. 05 Epilogue for an example.) But all three need to have a reason for being there, and I just don't see either of the Halidays feeling that need.
Perhaps Finding Our Way Ch. 05 Epilogue can help scratch the itch, though!
Happy reading!
O.F.
Two wonderful comments about 5 months apart. So great! Thanks so much!
I can see that you have been a happy reader of mine since the beginning. It means a great deal to me. I hope I can finish my current piece one day (I’ve got a beginning, middle, and end. But there’s still a lot missing before it can even be called a completed rough draft.)
Thank you for your warm comments. Thank you for your thanks.
re. your questions: I don’t have a clear answer for most of them. I don’ t think Jason would end up pressing charges against Pat. I feel that Betty and Leanne’s friendship would continue in a new – less close/deep – form. They are farther apart, geographically, and further apart, emotionally. There is little to no chance of Betty learning the “big secret” (assuming that’s the new nature of Leanne & Jason’s relationship.) I’d say it’s a coin toss whether they moved to a new town after Jay’s graduation. They could make it work either way. Re. The last hole: They would certainly get to it once things are settled and calmer.
Keep reading, enjoying, and commenting!
O.F.
I thought this was a great story. The reason for the different women was explained in a way that made good sense. The mom sounded like a knock out (I've always loved red hair) and the other ladies sounded nice as well. Story had a good ending as well. Ya done good!!