All Comments on 'Sometimes Harder is Best'
by ChloeTzang
- 42 Comments
Hi Chloe,
You make me fall for your character! They are just so adorable, smart, sexy, but so "girl next door". Thank you so much for taking the time to share your stories with us. I love your writing.
Steve
I'm now a fan and it's great to read such a descriptive and feeling story. I truly love and respect a woman's perspective and I look forward to catching up on your other stories and future endeavors. (Great profile pic by the way; adds to the visualization)
Your gentle lead up to Penny & her inhibitions was outstanding. The description of her responses to her own body & mind were tantalizing and kept this reader wanting to experience her de-flowering but hoping she would find love & sexual gratification.
You delivered it superbly & I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Congratulations,
Ron
The build up, the passion, the struggle to be free... Beautifully done, all of it! Found myself stretching it out, reading a bit at a time, not wanting it to end, but knowing the end would be great. Keep it up, and thank you for sharing!
You did it again! A great build up with Penny's first time, steaming wetness! To a great satisfaction both wanted!
You are diffenitly telling some great build up stories! Thanks for the good read.
I have to say thanks to all of you for all the really nice comments and great feedback. I'm so glad you all enjoyed it. Feedback like all of yours is so motivating while I get my head around this writing thing!!!! Nothing like coming back to see what one's readers think and reading all those wonderful comments. Thankyou so much all of you. Almost finished my next story ("Strawberry Loses Face") which I have been working on for 2 days straight while I have some time off. Should be submitting it tomorrow. Anyhow, thanks again so much and I'm so happy it's entertained you all...... Chloe
Great story. I love reading erotica written by women. Very sexy! I was SO turned on reading it! ;-)
I love your stories of the good Chinese girl discovering her sexuality and getting the hot guy with the big dick. I like her competitive streak with her slutty gwilow friends.
Would love to read more stories of sexy Chinese girls with harems of boys allowed different access to her sexual favours. For example, a cute Chinese girl with a great ass who has guys mesmerised at the beach, gym, catching flatmates sniff her panties and have her gwilow friends' boyfriends wanting to fuck her. The cute, sexy, funny girl in control... Just some thoughts, love to see how your writing develops.
Exquisite slow building and anticipation...!
Shut up and kiss me!!! :+)))
Wonderful story. I loved how you drew out the love-making, giving it aa tender reality.
I wanted to be there,...with you.
A wonderful story that got me more and more turned on. Even though the story is one of the longest ones I have encountered on Literotica, I kept wanting to read more.
I also appreciate how you respected the character Penny. She was a bit naïve, but you didn't have her end up becoming a mindless slut like the characters of too many stories ended up becoming. Instead, she learned to be confident in her sexuality while continuing to be true to herself (i.e. a good student).
I am also see that you threw a little reality into the story. Her trip to the pharmacy, after her first romp, was no doubt to get a morning after pill and some long term birth control, because a good girl like her wouldn't have thought she needed protection before meeting her blond boyfriend.
Keep up the great work!
I've read most of your stories now and they're absolutely great. But this one is one of your very best. I'm really hoping you'll do a sequel to the Penny and Eric story. I need to know what happens next and based on the comments I've read, your fans would like it, too!
I just saw that someone had nominated "Sometimes Harder is Best" for Best First Time Story in the 2015 Literotica Readers Choice Awards. All I can say is thankyou so much - I'm flattered that you think that highly of this story :)
Ciao...... Chloe
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Yet another enticing tale from this talented author.
This chronicle flowed very well with brilliant build up... And deliscously descriptive sex scenes... to entice the reader into craving more.
Alas it would have been nice to hear more appearance details of the main characters to make them more real and easier for the reader to picture in their minds.
All in all it is well worth my vote as best story.
Wow. 50,000 views in just over three months AND nominated for Best First Time Story. What can I say! Thankyou so much all of you for reading, enjoying, rating, commenting and an even bigger thx for those of you who've taken the time to vote for this as Best First Time story in the 2015 Literotica Awards. You all make this so worthwhile for a very humble wannabe author. Again, thank you ALL so much (she says with a big watery smile....I'm going all gushy here)
Virtual Hugs to every single one of you........ Chloe
I love this story, it hits right on in ohh so many ways. xoxoxoxo Annette
... for "Sometimes Harder is Best" for the 2015 Literotica Awards in the Best First Time Category. In the end this little story came second, which I was very pleased with (altho I would rather have come first but hey, second's not bad considering this was one of my first few stories on Literotica). So thx again to everyone who voted and to everyone whose read and enjoyed this story...... Chloe
The perfect balance of shy and demanding, of gentle and hard, of scared and certain, all in a progression that feels completely true - beautiful! I'm coming back for more of your stories, lots more.
I think if you liked this story you'll love my Chinese Takeout series
Really a good read. A little wordy at times, but definitely good to see it read from a woman's point of view. But Wasn't she chancing it first time without protection? Kind of selfish of Eric to proceed knowing it was her first time and he wore no protection?
Q - Wasn't she chancing it first time without protection?
A - Definitely, but hormones are hormones, especially when you're eighteen and attracted to someone very very strongly
Q - Kind of selfish of Eric to proceed knowing it was her first time and he wore no protection?
A - Hey, it's Literotica. Anything can happen. It's not the real world and social diseases don't exist. Reality is, alas, somewhat different to fiction.
Glad you enjoyed the story tho ...... Chloe
You are a terrific writer -- one of the most enjoyable I've read on this site. You go into great detail, and draw scenes out at great length and depth, but you keep things moving smartly through deft writing and mixing up dialog, narrative, metaphors, and descriptions of internal feelings. The erotic impact is really powerful -- the story has a great buildup, and it's got a great climax. Keep up the good work! I also like reading your stories because they give me things to think about in trying to improve my own stories -- I've got to step up my game!
One of, if not the best writer of erotic fiction Miss Chloe. I have read most all of your stories....love the detail, love the buildup, LOVE LOVE the kissing detail....looking forward to more from you!
Chloe,
You still have me Hypnotized, and addicted. I really Love the female perspective that you make look effortless and so real. PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I only regret that I did not read this sooner to make this number one.
Aloha
Jeff
Obviously a talented writer and plot appropriate to Literotica. Attitudes and emotions depicted well.
But the major drawback is verbosity. Something said. Then repeated in same paragraph. Maybe brought up again later. Reminds me of my wife and also a sister. (Female trait?). I would guess that the same plot and emotions could be conveyed with 30 to 50% fewer words.
Next problem. Going from virgin who has not even met the guy to multiple sex scenes with only 2 casual meetings with no dates, does not fit the profile of the shy, serious student the story started with. Too much too fast. As long as the story was stretched out, it could have been used to stretch out the too-compacted experience to a more appropriate timeline.
Paul in Oklahoma
Sorry forgot login and didn't want to comment annon. I liked your other stories but this one fell flat for me. Sorry but could care less about penny and Eric. A "good girl" virgin who loses her virginity at a house party with 7 people watching her and him not caring enough to just keep going really just sucked any interest out of the story for me. Kudos on your other works but not every stories for everyone.
Yes, this was one of my very first stories on Literotica and I’d write it rather differently if I was starting it over. I’d leave the start and end alone tho.
I dunno: I enjoyed it. The "being swept up in the moment" and sailing away with her passion rang true to me, and brought me into the story.
Thanks for the tale
Reltney Mcfee
Wonderful, marvelous early piece. You were still learning your craft, and for me it’s a delight to behold.
I am reading you Literotica offerings in no particular order. Do you have an order to suggest?
One question: this is at least the second “first time” story I’ve read of yours. Why do you gloss over the pain rupturing the hymen entails?
Great story well told.
A nice slow development and a nice happy end with a side blow to her roommate.
And a remark to some of my fellow raters:
Hey Literotica.com is a platform for fantasies, for stories like they are dreamed of.
There is no need for explicit plausibility.
There was no violence involved, the girl did enjoy the intercourse. That’s what it needs.
This had a wonderful build to it, and unfortunately, most of the first time stories on here, do not have. I loved her sense of vulnerability, and her awakening through all of it.