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Stockholm Syndrome

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John would get away with cheating because his wife was too naïve to understand the truth. Understand that some men really like to fuck. Some men like their women to slut it up. Some men like to have a slut in the bedroom. Men like their women to be sexual. Men don't like prudes in the bedroom. Tammy thought that what she provided should be enough to hold onto a man. John now realized how little effort she had put in to making herself attractive for him. Jessica had done more for him sexually in the last three days than Tammy had done in the last three years. And if she thought he could go back to the same vanilla sex after experiencing what Jessica had to offer, then she was mistaken. But she would not change. The sex would stay the same. If she tried to be rough like Jessica was, it would just come across as pathetic. A poor excuse for the real thing. John knew that in the back of her head Tammy knew the truth. She knew he had fucked Jessica because he wanted to. But she would lie to herself. She would hide the truth. Tammy was naïve enough to let her husband fuck Jessica and come back to her. Tammy was naïve enough to believe that her husband would come back to her after experiencing real sex, what a real woman had to offer. If she was that stupid, then John lost all respect for her intelligence. She clearly had no idea how the world worked.

Jessica was right. Their marriage was over. John tossed the handcuffs on the floor.

"I never loved her. I thought I did, but I didn't. I tricked myself into believing it, but you showed me how wrong I was." John said. Tammy started to cry. Jessica's eyes lidded over in lust.

"It's like I said earlier. The minute you were inside me, the first time you felt my tight little pussy on your dick, you were mine. Right?" Jessica asked, panting heavily.

"Yes!" John said.

"You fell in love with me at that moment." Jessica said.

"Yes!" John replied.

"And everything I did afterward only made you fall deeper and deeper in love with me." Jessica said.

"Yes!" John repeated.

"My pussy felt so fucking good that it made you realize you hate your bitch of wife. Didn't it?" Jessica asked.

"Yes!" John said passionately.

"Tell me what I want to hear." Jessica asked, her voice deep with lust.

"I love you, Jessica." John said.

Jessica pulled him toward her roughly, pulling him into a nasty French kiss. A lover's kiss. This rough kiss lasted minutes before John pulled back and moved his lips to her ear. John had felt her pussy spasm as he insulted her. He wanted more.

"Her pussy is so loose. I can barely feel her." John said. Jessica's pussy spasmed again as she groaned loudly.

"She's barely a woman. She practically has a boy's body." John said.

"Fuck!" Jessica screamed as her pussy spasmed again.

"I've been wanting to cheat on her for years." John said. Another hard fucking spasm.

"Fuck, you can stop, I get it. You love me!" Jessica said with a giggle. She pulled him into another rough kiss. She rolled him over, so she was now on top. Her hands grabbed the headboard, gaining more leverage. His hands returned to her breasts, cupping them as she started to ride him.

This fuck got rough quick. John was worried they would break the bed. The headboard was slamming into the wall loudly. The bed was rocking as Jessica bounced up and down on John's cock as he cupped and squeezed her massive tits, their considerable flesh pouring through his fingers.

"They're so fucking huge!" John screamed out in delight, squeezing her tits roughly as he admired them.

"You love these tits more than your wife?" Jessica asked.

"Yes! Fuck yes!" John yelled.

"How much do you love me?" Jessica asked.

"I love every part of you more than my wife. I love your skin more than her. I love your hair more than her. I love your face more than her. I love your lips more than her. I love your dirty fucking mouth more than her. I love your pussy more than her. I love your ass more than her. I love your asshole more than her. Do you understand that, Jess? I love your asshole more than I love my wife. If I had to choose, I would choose your asshole without question." John said, laughing.

"Fuck, John!" Moaning out loudly, slamming her hand on the headboard repeatedly as she came. But she was a good lover. One orgasm would not be enough to sate a whore like her. She kept bouncing like the good slut she was.

They fucked at this furious pace for over twenty minutes before they came at the same time, perfectly matched lovers they were. They ground together as they rode out their orgasms, and gently kissed as they recovered, cementing their true love. John finally got his hands on her round ass cheeks as they made out, squeezing them over and over.

John realized how tough of a life Jessica must have had. She had a near insatiable sexual hunger, yet never found a man to satisfy her. She had lived her life with this incredible sexual hunger yet never was able to find a consistent lover to care for her. She had worked for years, saving lives at the expense of her own sex life. She was a saint, really. She deserved this. She deserved to be fucked in whatever manner she wanted. She deserved the pleasure she was getting. John would always be there to give her the pleasure she rightfully deserved.

Jessica pulled her sweaty body off of John's and walked over Tammy. She grabbed Tammy's hand, and with a little struggle, pulled her wedding ring off of her finger.

"I think this belongs to me now." Jessica said, slipping the ring on her own finger. John, jumped out of bed, and pulled her back to the bed, Jessica laughing as he did so.

John bent her over on all fours. He got behind her, spread her ass cheeks apart, and dug right in, burying his tongue in her ass, rimming her until her asshole was soaked. He then kneeled behind her, placed his dick against her asshole, and started to push, burying his hard dick up her tight, welcoming asshole again. His hips soon came to rest against hers. John reached down and grabbed her hair. He pulled her up roughly, using her hair to pull her back as he started to fuck her ass hard.

They were facing Tammy as they fucked. Jessica looked at Tammy with a victorious smirk, knowing she had won. Tammy looked at her, full of hatred for what she did to her marriage. She didn't blame John as much as she blamed this bitch.

"I'm gonna find you. I'm gonna get you back for this." Tammy said, full of venom, watching her husband fuck the woman in front of her up the ass roughly. Jessica laughed.

"In your dreams, bitch. Once we're done here, you'll never see either of us again." Jessica explained. She started to moan out loud, John's ass fucking having its intended effect.

"John! I'm cumming!" Jessica moaned, out, her asshole clenching his dick as she started to come.

"Fuck, Jess! I love you!" John yelled out as he came, proclaiming his love for the woman he was now fucking up the ass. He came hard up Jessica's ass before falling forward, on top of her. He started kissing her neck as they both came down from their high.

Tammy was forced to watch through the entire night as her husband fucked this woman she absolutely hated. The worst part was the giggling. Hearing them laugh as they had sex made her see red. They were having fun. They were enjoying each other. Just watching their bodies writhing together in the dark was driving her insane. In between fucking, John was free to walk around, go to the bathroom, whatever. Tammy called out to him, but he ignored her. He didn't care about her anymore. He only cared about Jessica.

Tammy thought the ordeal was over as morning approached. Then, Jessica had a naughty idea, which caused her to giggle. John laughed as he heard it. John called off work the next day, then called off for Tammy as well.

Tammy was forced to watch as for yet another day as her husband and that evil bitch had sex. Jessica was really rubbing it in her face. After a few hours of this, they broke apart and started to clean up. They showered together before getting dressed. They started to pack up Jessica's stuff, then John started to pack some of his stuff up too. Jessica had told him to pack up the stuff he wanted to keep, because they were not coming back.

A few hours later, John and Jessica returned to the bedroom.

"Well, Tam, I guess this is goodbye. It was nice getting to know you." Jessica said, barely controlling her laughter. John said nothing, looking away. Jessica pushed her trusty rag up to Tammy's face, dosing her again. The last thing Tammy saw before falling into a daze was her husband taking Jessica's hand in his, her wedding ring glinting on Jessica's finger, as they walked out hand in hand. Tammy passed out.

*********

Tammy woke up a few hours later, all alone. She was still tied to the chair, but one hand was untied. She moved quickly to untie herself, but it was not easy. She panicked, wanting desperately to escape this chair. She finally had to slow herself down as she struggled to untie herself.

After about an hour of work, Tammy freed herself from the chair, jumping out of it as soon as she could. She looked around for any sign of anyone. Nothing. She saw the stains from the baby oil on the carpet and the bed sheets, a reminder of Jessica's naked flesh coated with baby oil. Paint flecks from the wall were on the floor, having been knocked off by the headboard, during Jessica's furious riding of her husband.

Tammy investigated the house. A lot of her husband's stuff was gone. The house felt empty. No traces of Jessica were left either. Tammy realized for the first time that her husband was truly gone.

Tammy screamed as loud as she could.

She ran to the phone to call the cops. Little did she know that she was fighting a losing battle. Jessica's work was impeccable. There were no fingerprints, no stray hairs, no evidence that Jessica had ever been there. Jessica had disposed of all the evidence thoroughly.

The cops would arrive, but they would soon realize there was nothing there to build a case around. Nothing but the ranting of an emotional, hysterical woman. They would view her as a crazy woman. A woman whose husband had left her. A woman who had concocted a detailed story justifying why he had left, a story seemingly not based in reality. She didn't realize how crazy she seemed. They figured her husband had left her, and she had lost it. A dark side of them didn't blame him. How could anyone want to be married to this psycho?

The case would go nowhere, leaving Tammy alone in her home, a home which constantly reminded her of the husband she had lost. This house was full of bad memories, and she would be forced to move. To a small home more befitting her small salary.

She would be obsessed with finding her husband, and getting vengeance against that bitch who stole him. But again, she was fighting a losing battle, not realizing that she would never see either of them again. Her husband was out of reach for her now.

**********

(Six Months Later)

John couldn't have been happier. He fit into Jessica's life perfectly. All of her friends loved him. All of her coworkers loved him. All of her family loved him. John admired how well Jessica hid the dark side of her nature. At work, and in social settings, she was a total professional. No one except John knew about her dark side. John was the only one Jessica trusted enough to show that side of herself. She trusted him, because she always knew he was her true love. The only clue that might give her dark side away was her penchant for exposing a few inches of juicy cleavage in whatever top she wore. But everyone understood. Her tits were so massive, it'd be impossible not to show them off!

John was not disappointed when he entered into his new life with her. She had not lied about her status. She was a star surgeon, and was admired by most of the other doctors and nurses at the hospital. They were happy to see her settle down with a good man. They all knew she deserved it because she was a catch. Everyone they knew thought they were a perfect couple. A doctor married to a teacher. But if they knew what went on inside their home, if they saw the dark, sexual nature of their relationship, they might not think the same way.

Being the star surgeon she was, she was loaded. She loved living the high life, and was not afraid to flaunt it. She had a mansion, which was always too big for her alone, but now it served as a perfect home for her and her husband. Life as a member of the rich was a very new experience for John, but he settled in as if he had always belonged. The vain side of him loved the fact that he had a gorgeous wife on his arm to show off. At parties, women would see him, dressed in the finest clothes, and would want to sink their claws in him. But then they saw Jessica at his side, wearing one of her expensive dresses that she loved so much. They would see the huge rock on her finger, and a smaller diamond right below it. Those women would see Jessica's body in her tight dress, her long legs, her round ass, her huge tits, and they knew that this bitch had locked down John for good. He wasn't going anywhere.

John still taught, having started at the local prep school as soon as he moved to the city. All the teachers and students loved having him around. The slutty high school girls loved seeing their new high school teacher was this hot guy. Some of them conspired to make a move on him, but they never had the chance. He was always on the move. Little did they know he had to be ready to fuck Jessica whenever she wanted, so that meant many mid-day visits to the hospital to eat his wife's pussy in her office. Or maybe a hard fuck on her desk. Some days, John would have to rush out of school as the bell rang, rush to the hospital and meet his wife as she left surgery. They would go into her office and lock the doors. He would bend her over the desk, pull down her scrubs, and bury his hard dick in her tight ass. Being on her feet all day made her back so sore. A nice hard ass fuck usually cured what ailed her.

The high school sluts never stood a chance. John's balls were being constantly drained, so his eyes never wandered. Why would they when he was married to the hottest slut he had ever met?

So this was John's new life. He would have rough sex, two or three times a day, minimum, with his gorgeous slut of a wife in his dream house after coming home from his dream job. That's of course not counting the fucks they would have at her office. His life was truly perfect. She was everything he had ever wanted in a woman. And he did everything she wanted.

After him and Jessica came down from a hard fuck in their marital bed, Jessica riding his hard dick to a screaming orgasm as he shot his load deep inside her, she moved to his ear and whispered two words.

"I'm pregnant."

John was ecstatic, and he was also was not surprised. With the amount of fucking they did, it was bound to happen. And at the rate they planned to continue fucking, this child would not be their last. John looked up into her eyes and pulled her in to a deep kiss.

He was so happy. Happy for Jessica. She deserved this. She was brilliant. She was gorgeous. She had a perfect body. Sure, she might be a little psycho, but she was too hot for him to be bothered by that. She deserved his baby. She deserved a big family. She deserved to be a mommy.

His dick rejuvenated, he rolled her over and started slamming his dick in and out of her again. He loved her so much. He would never stop fucking her. He would never stop pleasuring her. He owed her everything. She had led him to his new life. She was his dream woman. He loved her.

*

(Author's Note: I just want to again thank everyone for their continued support of my stories. I know this was a long one, and I appreciate those that stuck through it to the end. I will to try to trim these up a bit in the future. I also want to encourage any fans of these types of stories to give writing them a shot. I was a fan for years before deciding to write some myself, tired of waiting for more. This genre of stories is very small, but from I've seen, it's pretty popular. I want to see more of these stories written, so if you're a fan, give it a shot. If I see just one person start writing more of these stories, then I will be happy. If you want to start writing, and you want someone to bounce ideas off of, feel free to leave me a comment. As always, if anyone has any story suggestions, also feel free to send me a comment. My next story should be up soon. It will be called "She Wants More than the Tip." Keep your eyes peeled for it. Thanks.)

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AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Great work, ignore the haters. Or idk u probably get off on em knowing Jessica haha

readnwrite73readnwrite735 months ago

The brutality and down right evil meanness of a story like this will never appeal to me. If Jessica wanted John she could have seduced him in other ways without being so brutal to Tammy. There is a special place in hell for people like John and Jessica , and the sooner they get there the better off the world will be.

LamppLampp12 months ago

Love the story exactly as it is, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As usual roughly half the comments on a talkman story are complaining about the things that make a talkman story what it is.

I know people have made this point elsewhere but it doesn't hurt to belabor it: it's a fairly safe bet that a good chunk of you who hate Jessica would be completely okay with the situation had the genders been reversed and it was a male trying to cuck the MC and steal the spouse. Women are still not allowed to be sexual aggressors in the same way men are. The double standard is still a thing - especially in porn.

All this to say: thanks, TalkMan, for keeping the rare-kink fires burning with your constant flow of hot, evil women stories. If good girls are allowed to lust after Dracos in Leather Pants, why can't good boys lust after sexy, scheming villainesses?

Karl_HundassonKarl_Hundassonover 1 year ago

Well written story, but I hated it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My heart completely broke for Tammy. I wish we could see her tracking down Jessica and John and getting her revenge. Or better yet, healing and becoming the best version of herself. But seeing at this story was published more than a decade ago, I doubt the author would even try to make things right for us at this point. It’s just really disappointing to read something like this without any type of resolution.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was a great story and being a long story only made it better because it allowed building up your characters and developing the scenes well. Loved it. Your a best in class. Keep it up

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

I was waiting for Jessica to do something even more evil, she seemed like a Hannibal Lecter type! 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Way to long. Almost stopped

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

As much as I had enjoyed reading this, I would really like it if we get to see the losing wives get a form of healing or revenge in an another story. Up to you if they will win this time or still lose pathetically.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
John don’t make no sense

John wants the good life but is a teacher? LOL. Also, teachers make shit money-and he’s ripping on his wife for being a BANK TELLER? Seems like John is just a very insecure guy. Beauty fades, my guy. Should have held down your wife. She was a keeper. Also, Jessica can’t just “take her ring”. That’s her property now. The least Tammy can do is claim it’s stolen. Jessica is wearing it right on her damn finger. Also, how is Jessica going to get rid of all Johns DNA in her vag? Tammy can go ahead and file for divorce and get all the money. Just pointing out the flaws. My girl and I were thinking of adding another person in the bedroom and this turned me off. So thanks, I guess?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Tracking them down

I would like to see a follow-up in which Tammy tracks them down. He's teaching again and she's a star surgeon. It's not like they're hiding.

CheeachaserCheeachaserabout 4 years ago

What kind of woman humiliates someone like that?

The best kind. Tie me down please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Would be cool if Tami got a remodel

Loved the story , nice build up. Would love to see return of Tami. She gets her body done over and seduces John .

He doesn't recognize here as she had plastic surgery on her face as well as her boobs and etc . Also turns Jessica into a lesbian

And turns table on the couple only to reveal who she is after seducing the too. Exposing Jessica dark side

Ravey19Ravey19over 4 years ago
Awesome

Not keen on the title and its implications but what a story so I can put that aside. Love the writing style and the plot line with all the dialogue. Not sure I'd survive having Jessica as my surgeon but what a way to go. Def 5 * .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
amazing

An absolutely awesome story. You are such an awesome write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow

Ohhhhh yessss.

My hands are hot and wet with my orgasm. That was amazing- your stories are the best!!

thegreat_pretenderthegreat_pretenderover 5 years ago
One of the greatest writers in Literotica history

I’ve been slowly working through all of your stories, and believe me when i say they’re some of the greatest works I’ve seen in all of my many years on this site. Don’t ever question your talent. You have a gift and you deserve every award!

badgirlfan69badgirlfan69over 6 years ago
A+

I absolutely loved this series!! I don't know why but the husband cheating &/or stories about cuckqueens are a Total turn-on!! I just wish there were more of them! Thank you for writing & PLEASE don't stop! Excellent!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NO WORDS FOR IT ! ! !

I really don't know how to thank you. I have read many stories and many with a lot of joy and excitement, but this one tops them all and it does so BY FAR.

It must have taken a lot of time to write it down - thank you for the effort and I hope to see other stories from you (still have to check this out, I was way too much banned by the story as to be able to do this...).

This is kine of a fantasy I have for several years now, but oh my God my fantasy will from now on always have to do with this very story. It's so extremely wicked, and that is exactly what makes it so damn hot. Furthermore I would say that you have found the right measure in building up the story (and the different parts) and than the sex parts itself. I would say that some stories on this site miss kind of a fore-play - yours is tremendous. wooooow. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Masterpiece

One of the best stories on this site. I keep coming back to it.

iceblockiceblockalmost 7 years ago
It's just fiction guys!

What a great story!!! Thank You so much for writing it.

To all the whiners about this and that, it's just fiction! These aren't real people and this never really happened. That's the great stuff about fiction, none of it has to be real or make sense. Even more so in freely distributed erotica. None of You paid this man a cent for his effort so You really have no need to grumble. Grow up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ridiculous.

Same silly ridiculous story every time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I love your stories

This one was fun because the wife had to watch. I'm ready for the House of Crow battle to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Disappointing

I only skimmed to the end hoping Jessica might turn the tables and have sex with Tammy. The writing is good, it is Stockholm syndrome, but sad and psychotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bigamist

You left out the the fact he is a bigamist. No mention of a divorce.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lunacy

Jessica was nuts, just like the plot. Shame. It really had the potential to be a really hot story, but the timeline was totally unbelievible. No one would do such a U-turn on a faithful marriage in just a few days unless they were as mental as she was. Pity it wasn't months of seduction and calculated wickedness with a bit more sex and a little less eww. Nasty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Give Me a Fu**ing Break

NFW!

boatbummboatbummalmost 8 years ago
Well Written, but....

Five stars for the writing, but I have to say that this genre is not my cup of tea.

I couldn't bring myself to read the whole thing, sorry.

Going to try your Incest/Taboo stories now.... ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Oh God!

I hate myself for liking this so much. Dark, sexy, depraved, sexy, perverted and sexy as hell :)

Did I mention sexy?

EromanticaEromanticaabout 8 years ago

This story is so dark and evil, yet hot. In a sick way I couldn't help but feel happy for them in the end.

Lisabug1021Lisabug1021over 8 years ago
Another awesomely hot story.

So few authors have the courage to write pure cheating stories in which the wife is not 'ok' with it. This element shoots up the heat. That the man's inability to overcome his overwhelming lust for the other woman just sends the sexiness into another dimension. I'm not into blatant humiliation, just the wife knowing her husband can't resist the other woman is usually enough. This story May have changed my mind. It was beyond HOT.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
My fave

I love your stories. Yes there is a common thread. But this is my favorite.I only wish that Jess had bigger breasts and were filled with milk before she got pregnant. Anyway ignore these idiots who don't like your stories. I love the genre the betrayal the humiliation all of it. I just want the battle between the Clines and Crow to happen. It doesnt even have to be sexy. Make a whole novel. It would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Commenters need to learn to read

Very enticing, very erotic and extremely dirty. The climax was well thought out and the change of the character was fluid. Do not be discouraged by the comments you have received up until now as they seem to be from people who are too lazy to actually read the content to follow the progression. However I think that this would have been better as a short novel rather than a short story, as it would allow for a better introduction of character background.

Well written (with a few spelling mistakes) and very well thought out.

jimbo103jimbo103over 9 years ago
the hearts want what the heart wants!

what the difference between this story, fit v/s fat & hipster chicks like big dicks, all stories from the same author, the common connection is humiliation betrayal self preservation & higly elaborate & descriptive seduction & copulation.

have to agree with below comment "most depressing shit ever" but here in lies the irony there is a hidden true nature of human's , we do delude ourselves as intellectuals with free will, when the sad reality is we are just mindless drones give the illusion of choice(free will). its not all doom & gloom, but acceptance of your true nature can only lead you to a path where you could really choose how to exercise control over the true human nature.

i pride myself not to be normal, though i have my own battles, the true human nature is a very bleak existence in my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This is the most depressing shit I've ever read on this site, but...

si es la Vida, it's also very well written. 5 stars !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Tammy's revenge

I'd like to read dat Tammy got herself re-done n was back in John n Jessica's life with a vengeance.. N dat she strikes home for good!!

shadowdustershadowdusterabout 10 years ago
What a piece of shit!!!!

I only could read the first 2 chapters then the last to see if John grew any Balls. It needs another hapter where Tammy finds them cuts his balls off and fucks Jessics up big time so neather one of them can never fuck anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Lost for words

I honestly cannot put into words the acclaim I hold for this story. This was one of the best I have ever read, and I've hunted this site for over 3 years. I cannot say enough praise to you to even scratch the surface of what you deserve. Thank you so much. I hope you write more of these masterpieces.

teach1965teach1965almost 11 years ago
Ditto +5

Excellent tale...all I can do is echo the sentiments of the ones who loved this story.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 11 years ago
Just as Remorseless the 2nd read around

this story leaves no aphrodisiac stone unturned, cerebral button unpushed or carnal failing unpunished. If Richard Dawkins ( today's Charles Darwin) could write with a mean streak - these would be the kind of twisted tales he'd tell.

I don't want to love this story & give it full marks, but like the main male character , there is no other intellectually honest choice to make.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

This was incredible! I love the "Saw" horror aspect of this, and it is also just sexy as hell and even romantic. Really enjoyed this, it felt like a roller coaster ride and it was really convincing how she slowly enacted her brilliant plan. When I ask for "porn with a plot" THIS is what I mean; the plot enriches the porn and the porn enriches the plot.

Awesome work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Impressive

I loved how the story was long and lengthy. It was very enjoyable. You should writes more stories like three. Nonetheless, I loved it. Thank you so much for this story (:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sorry

Just too long and disjointed. I got lost in the blah, blah, blah. Unbelievable

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
yuuuuuck!

very very sad.

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 12 years ago
Why..

did it take me so long to find your works. Because this is exactly what I have been looking for a long time. Great work. Minor annoyances are in the feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
O.O

Love the length of your stories and pretty much everything else in them, Maybe their first meeting in the hospital could have been different, more memorable and have a bigger impact on Jessica. Her been sad after an operation didn't go as planned and him comforting her like a good friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Story idea

Just wanted to pass this idea along. I thought it might be interesting if you combined some of the genres you write into one story. Part one: Man reluctantly submits to strong female domination. A story similar to this one and many of the others I've read of yours. Part Two would be the departure. Man is forced by the strong female to seduce his daughter and turn her into a slut. Sort of like your Tasting Candy series. Just a thought. Love the stories. Keep up the great work.

KingReyKingReyover 12 years ago
Another Master Class in Erotic writing

The build-up (insult game) was superbly developed and realized.

I could read your stories all day. Thanks for another great one!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
The author has created a creating new genre !

This story is clearly a parodeatragikomidee. Nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
so sad.....

it made me cry. I couldn't even read it just skipped to the end. Maybe you'll give us a happy ending where the wife gets her back. Or at least gets a hot one herself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Absolutely fucking gripping!! Amazing characterisation.... And so (unfortunately..) believable when he starts to fall for her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent piece of writing.

Excellent concept. I was thoroughly engrossed in the plot and read it every spare minute until I found out what happened. A minor criticism would be that there are typos -- he for she, he for her -- incorrect word usage such as "their" for "they're" and "your" for "you're," and "lied" for "lay" as in "they lied down on the bed." No problem: this is what editors are for once the writer has done the creative stuff.

I suppose one reviewer has a point about the difficulty of leaving no evidence, but this is a fantasy and perhaps we can allow a bit of leeway? I think the idea is ingenious, that is, the home invasion and the 13 insults. I thought Jessica's reasoning was very persuasive, and I had the feeling that the writer is a person of some experience and accustomed to thinking about life. I found myself going along with her and began to root for Jessica. I'm delighted to see this author is prolific. Don't you hate it when you find a favorite author only to discover s/he has written only a few stories?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Your stories

They make me really sad when the ordinary girls get f'd over by the hot chicks. At least you don't condone it real life...

ForonceForonceabout 13 years ago
like it but

unless she covered the place in plastic there would be some form of evidence.: )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
holy crap

Just read the story and all I can say is Holy god dam crap... amazing

carljenikcarljenikabout 13 years ago
Brilliantly written

Your thought process is excellent. The 13 insult system works well. Good luck with future stories!

verbicideverbicideover 13 years ago
Okay but...

Since I'm the type of person who favors a little (okay a lot) hard justice, it would've been nice to see Tammy find them and cripple the bitch. Just sayin'.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
By the way anon above...

the story you refer to (one of the overly disseminated sixville stories) can't compare to this one.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Almost perfect but you provided no reason....

....for him to end up delighting in being cruel to Tammy. A few days of coercion and a Dr's order is not enough motivation. Great effort and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

I really enjoyed that story, it was very sadistic. I have to say the cruelty to Tammy was too much for me though. I loved Jessica and John though. I think the problem was Tammy didn't get any retribution. Well thought out and wonderful title though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Artful, truely a masterpiece! Somewhat disturbing, but that just added to the aura.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Waiting for your next story

From the time i read your last one, i have been checking everyday for your next one.. where is it ?

sassysasha89sassysasha89about 14 years ago
Best story yet

I believe that this is the best story you have writtten so far and all of your works are great and so damn arousing!

I can't wait for the next story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great story

I really like the slow build-up and gradual corruption. I like stories where the guy is led in stages, the early ones easily rationalized, to a place he never thought he'd be. It's vastly more convincing (and more erotic) than the immediate "yes, I love you pussy more than my wife" stories of this sort. Would like to see more stories of this sort, perhaps where the guy has even more control over his actions, and things start a little more innocently. Here's a great example, fwiw: //rosa-blanca.ru/desixxxphoto/stories/showstory.php?id=262865

Anyway, really liked the story! Keep it up!

Just_the_tipJust_the_tipabout 14 years ago
Best story

Excellent job! Despite the length, found myself skipping over very few long paragraphs looking for dialogue. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great read

I love your stories. They are a real treat in a genre that is not often fielded.

If you are taking request. One element that I believe would work well, is the "slut" trying on the underwear of the betrayed girl. The slut could comment on how her chest overwhelms the bra, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not sure why you hated Tammy so much

but no one desrves kind of a beating. She deserves better and John deserves a kick to the junk. Repeatedly.

One question...who the fuck is Dan?

Mortus946736Mortus946736about 14 years ago

That was amazing. I admit, i started reading thinking this would be a quick one, but instead i saw real plot develop, and a good story that kind of makes sense, even in a sick way. Gotta love being him, and feel sorry for the wife. This story has a twinge of realism in that it didnt end happily, it ended with the slut stealing the good husband and making him as horny as she is. Love it, faved, and five stars. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Dude...

In the totally non gay way. I love you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Everything.

Creative. Seductive. Well-paced. But most of all, Jessica was one hot evil bitch. Awesome. Looking forward again to the next one.

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