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"Exactly. So I'll see you at quarter of eight. We'll figure out how to get your car later." He grinned. "And I'll hold you to that blow job, next time I see you. 7:45...I can't wait!"
"Why Stevie, you really are a sweet boy!"
- COMMENTS
Thank you for your comments Anon and Grayge. The other 2 chapters of this story have been completed and submitted. Just waiting for them to be posted. The last chapter (yes, the mother) is my favorite...and I think tasteful. For me, even touching.
Really glad to hear you enjoyed the writing!
This is a great first story, both in the sense of the first one published on this site and in the sense that you can write sequels to this one. I'd try to continue a few with this woman rather than having your protagonist quickly cycle through all the women. Yes, you can go the incest route with his mother, but a lot of new writers lose their realism when they try to get into more fanciful situations.
Now there are only a minimum of three additional chapters. Make it for each of the remaining two women friends and lastly his mother. Your writing style is very good. I can't think of any criticisms and you don't deserve any as well.
Looking forward to your next chapter.