All Comments on 'Sweetest of Hearts Ch. 05'
by UltimateSin
- 32 Comments
mmm great, read love your work. Thought the Ex was going to join them in the end but it did not happen.
Love this story but also waiting on another chapter in the Marine storie. Love to see where you take that one.
I have really enjoyed all the chapters in this story. I liked the ending. Thanks you and look forward to your next story.
Just loved the series I hope you will continue to write another one dealing with all their childrens.
You did a splendid job with this series. Fantatsic ending. Love howbyou brought firgivness back for ex.
A Lovely series with a beautiful ending.
It's so easy to get carried away with this type of story, but you have stayed true to base story throughout the entire series. It's nice to see love like this and it not be filled with dirty, nasty, sex of unbelievable proportions. I could actually see this happening in real life. It was sweet, loving, erotic and hot everything i could want in this type of story. Thanks for sharing!
This was certainly a tour-de-force. How you kept all those characters in the right place in the story is beyond me but then I wasn't the one living it. I would like to know the formula for maintaining a menage of such complexity even a fictitious one but it all worked out well, and not a hint of authority poking it's ugly nose in. I say well done and after a bit of a lie down, please, don't keep us waiting too long for your next epic. At least 5 stars.
A very good story overall, and i was hoping you wouldn't include the ex-wife in the mix. It would have been a shame to consider that character a simp after such a great read.
One of your best! These are the stories I enjoy the most; a real and interesting plot, relatable characters, a healthy dose of romance, and smoking sex. Well done
1) buy a matching engagement ring for Sofia and stop with the Mistress Title. Way too much "sex" for me, just stick with the thoughts, arrangement, and you never say anything about all the "new" children's activities.
Wish I could be loved and be a super stud like Mark. It was long but very interesting. Good enough to continue on to read more of your stories.
Lovely story. Surprised no one commented about Claire. I thought for sure the daughters would drag her into Mark's bed at the end, and was a little disappointed it didn't happen, just to complete the circle....
A great story of life, love and circumstances that turned out for the better for all.
What a great story!
I really liked how he ended up with the four girls at the end. You somehow managed to make it fairly believable, which was always going to be a hard task.
I'm also glad that he never allowed Claire back in their bed. She already got far more forgiveness than she really deserved, so sleeping with her would've been crossing the line. Besides, she was 50 by that time, and would look like crap compared to his harem of 32-year-olds.
What's funny is Australia is literally filled with Trailer Park Trash. There are probably more Rednecks in Australia than below the Mason Dixie Line.
This genre is generally not my cuppa joe, but this series is a delightful exception. The situation is certainly…….ummmm……unconventional, but romance, respect, and love flow from every page. I have difficulty imagining anyone having the income to support that many wives and children, but the story is otherwise relatable. Even a contrite and remorseful Claire becomes almost likable at the end. 5 stars all the way across.
Wonderful story. Would love a prequel, maybe there kids get something going?
It's funny I was thinking about times I'd spent in Aussie and to be honest girls there are sexualised really early. I mean it's not unusual for 12 year olds to be having regular sexual relations with multiple partners crazy I know but true. Public Parks at night are regular places where kids meet and I'm talking 12-18 and they party get stoned and have sex.
Maybe uncomfortable for some but it's simply a part of growing up poor in Australia.
Having reread this series I can only re-iterate my enjoyment of it. Sure some can say they did not like it, but simply put I did.
Normally I am not into incest-stories at all, I don’t really know why but I really enjoyed this one.
Yay Katie also gave Daddy a child :) Alright now it feels right.
Poor Claire. Another marriage in the bin. Though she was not at fault this time. I know many would say karmic justice and all that, but I actually feel sorry for her. She thought she was doing what was best for her (admittedly she could have done it a far better way) and ended up suffering a betrayal similar to the one she had done to her first family. At least she has her son though and managed to reconcile with her daughters and they all forgave her. I suppose this is the likely scenario to occur for most folks in these situations after that length of time, though I can't help but wonder if I would have been able to forgive her if I had been in Mark's position.
A lovely ending to a wonderful story. Definitely saving this and will be reading it again in future. One of your best I reckon.
Your stories almost always end up with me using 2 or 3 kleenex. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. On to the next one.
Absolutely one of the best stories I’ve read on here !!! However, I think it would have been better without the ex wife Claire coming back into their lives. But maybe that’s just me. Please keep writing, more stories like this !!!