- NonConsent/Reluctance
- Take
- Comments
All Comments on 'Take'
by TheGreyKnight
- 9 Comments
lead the group you're the pres. the king of fucked up!
Two things: I hope you're a student of psychology, or wrote this on a dare. Too close for comfort, sir.
You really should use an editor. If not for the technical mistakes, I would have given you a higher rating.
It was frightening really. Really really horrible
1. (directed entirely at the other comments) If you do not like the story due to the writing technique, deal with it. Don't complain. Different writing styles work for different people. If you don't like a story then don't read it, simple.
2. (to the author) Interesting view. Not exactly porn but had a nice edge. Tease gets payback. Ignoring the other comments, it is a well written story. ^_^ I liked it.
Minx.
Horrifying and I'd never want it to happen to myself. However, your story made me cum violently. The obvious insanity of the man added another level of horror and hotness. Thank you and good job.
Oh god how I wish that this could have been me... Keep up the good work please.
Your sexy voice, alone, makes me wanna cum, but this story really made me wet! I wish I could be victimized by you.