All Comments on 'The Book Signing Pt. 02'
by FOUNTAINPEN67
- 5 Comments
What a wonderful surprise...another story by a most talented writer. And about and including other hot writers. Had we wet and horny. My hubby was the recipient of your erotic words. 5 Stars
5 stars from me....loved the phone videoing that blast.....keep it up Bill.....great! Kisses...Britt
Love this chapter. You’re such a great writer with so much to say and such a vivid mind (not imagination - I suspect most of what you write is true :-)
This chapter is so very well written, I want so badly to be there with you and Brittni and Amanda that I can taste it. Love you guys xoxoxoxoxoxox Annette
PS. Had lost my phone so it took a few days to get something new :-)
No, not erotic devices of a physical nature...there were none in the story. But your use of literary devices--metaphor, simile, alliteration, added an excellent frosting to superbly baked story. A fin from me, plus wishing I was there.