by dirty_lover
And the dream of many a young man, I'd bet! A thrilling story with a little of everything, beautifully mixed; I wait, with bated breath as the saying goes, for the next chapter!
4*s - well done.
Wow, this is a GREAT story! Awesome attention to details, both in the story itself and the actual narration, right down to the punctuation. Both in parts 1 and 2, you built up the sexual "tension" and excitement like a real professional. Thanks a bunch for the great story, and I'm EAGERLY awaiting the third chapter! Easily 5 stars. :)
Both parts 1 and 2 were amazing! The story is so fluid and the plot is actually believable. I'm actually drawn to these characters and the story. Can't wait to read what happens next. 5 stars out of 5!
And a loving domme to boot. Right up my alley.
Please, please, please, continue this story. And write more stories of this sort.
She would be what most submissive men want. She would take them to bed to be her sex toy. I would have wanted this in my youth.