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Click hereI had no intention of stopping now, as I could feel the usual stirrings deep in the base of my cock, that almost seemed to be from the tips of my toes and foretold of my approaching climax too.
She got her release first, a shuddering, teeth-clenching, spasm, rippled through her, but the only sound was of her rapid breathing. Her body though, jerked, forcing me hard up inside her. I guess at the moment of orgasm her involuntary action was to ensure my sperm got as close to her womb as possible.
I didn't disappoint.
As I felt her vagina grip me, clenching and squeezing, the first jet of semen splashed the very top of her vagina, followed by several more. That only seemed to make her try to get more of me inside her, if that were even possible. I tried to make no noise too, but I am sure I groaned quietly when I felt my cum being pumped up into her.
I collapsed, leaning into her; my arms went round her back, her legs still wide open on the arms of the chair with me between them.
We both tried to get our breath back and just stayed like that for a few minutes until I started to feel my cock softening and slowly sliding out of Sue.
I pulled back slightly and with an audible wet 'plop' my cock left her pussy, followed by a thin stream of liquid, the mixture of my cum and her juices.
She wasn't finished with the photos yet though.
"Quick, take a photo of it dribbling out," she whispered, "I want to see what it looks like close up."
My hands were still shaking, but I tried to do it as best I could.
"I'll see if I can squeeze a bit and make some more come out," she said.
I waited with the camera poised and sure enough after a few seconds, a large white stream flowed out from between her wide-open pussy lips.
"I didn't know you could do that," I exclaimed, quietly, and impressed with her muscular control.
"I didn't either," she said, grinning, "does it look sexy?"
"Oh yea, you wait and see when I print all of these," I said, "I think they will be better than those in the old magazines we started with."
"Mmmm, can't wait," she said, still grinning.
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- COMMENTS
What a delightfully, deliciously,dirty girl your lovely sister Sue is, I remember those days, our naivety our exploration of self and others around us. And you write of it so beautifully, with tenderness, I'm sure you must be a professional in your other world but thanks for sharing your stories, you will know this is not the first time I have read them. Your sister Sue must have been a good friend and maybe still is.
I've loved all the chapters so far. If I had a sister like Sue, I'd be sneaking into her bedroom every night. We could fuck and suck the night away. Now, I need to cum so bad, I'm going to read this chapter again.
I Just realised I didn't vote or comment on this the first time I read it, as I may not comment but I always vote on the stars. So here goes Brill 5 stars.
Good premise continued.
But sex is so automatic. No real nervousness. Not much foreplay.
Disappointing. Three stars.
Superb story, seemed so natural. Certainly got me hard though i had to read in chapters as written, due to not being alone. Is there a chapter 11? Feel it ended rather bluntly. Great work anyway. Thank you.
Like the previous 9 absolutely invigorating, which brought back some lovely memories from the early sixties.
Great story and great series! I think I remember a story or two where you teased some anal action and would love to see that explored!
It was very enjoyable, well written, well paced and had enough variation to keep me reading until I got to the last chapter. Reminds me a lot of times I spent with my sister though we never got this far, more’s the pity.
One suggestion though, have you considered using an editor to help you by reviewing your story before it is published? It would still be your story and your work but you could have some feedback to help you, for example, if the story is set in the past there is no need to mention differences with today’s technologies or getting muddled up with Sunday shopping because those did not open in the timeframe of this story.
If you are interested please let me know as I would be happy to help you, I do some reviewing for other authors on Literotica.
Well done and please keep writing
Simply outstanding. 5 stars isn't enough. I love "Sue" and where she was heading - then, you abruptly end. I sincerely hope that there are more installments to come, as this was a great series. I just want to complement you for resisting the temptation that (for my tastes) far too many authors fall into - namely, turning hesitant family members into raging nymphomaniacs that engage in endless "dirty talk" while having sex. "More" is not always better and you balanced playful but enticing banter with people just discovering different aspects of their interests. I also am glad that Sue developed a risk-taking, exhibitionist & voyeur side - but seems content to keep things on a more realistic scale (if incest can be said to be on the "realistic" end of the scale!).
You are a great story teller and I am anxious to read more of your chapters and stories. This story I found more exciting in the first half of the chapters. It has now become more of an adult sexual relationship. Still a great story as all of yours are but I see this story possibly ending up where they go off and live like a couple as they have drifted away from the family for the most part.
This is a great story, totally believable & well written. I cannot wait for the next episode to appear, hopefully Mum will have some photo's taken soon & heaven knows where that will lead. Keep up the good work, well done.