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Click hereHis smile faded and was replaced by...concern? She wasn't certain.
"Lena...Lena love," he said urgently, suddenly sitting up. He started towards her, and Lena automatically felt herself backing away from him.
It was only then that Lena realized she was crying and trembling heavily. The guilt was apparent on his face, but for some reason, it made her cry harder.
"Lena, I'm so sorry—"
His words were cut off by a loud, blood curdling scream that caused a painful shiver to travel down her spine.
Ava.
- COMMENTS
Ehhhh I too am confused, I've read this series over and over and this reaction is literally something I cannot understand. Is she projecting ? Maybe she doesn't understand what she's actually asking for, or is she so confused by the idea that she can enjoy this much, whilst feeling pain. And not processing it. Idk but love the plot ethier way, really hope they get their happy ever after
Ehhhhh I too am confused, I've reread this series over and over and this episode always puzzles me, as the rest of the plot relies on this strange interaction. Is Lena so confused by the fact that she can react so hard to renz when he is being too rough? Or the fact that she really like this amount of froce? Maybe she doesn't actually understand what she is asking for. Idk, but I guess it is the puzzle of being human. Overall great plot, Hoping for a happy ever after
Ehh I'm so confused she told him she secretly wanted to be raped even begged him this last time to use her. Then she scrambles away from him in anguish and tears I kno she is young but her indecisive in the bedroom hurts my damn head.
The Taking and Keeping of Lena series has me straddling the chapters to preserve each page. I am so in love with this romantic/non-consensual/consensual/erotic/spine tingling love story. Even though I am not at the end of this series, I am going to be greedy at this point and like the others ask for more, more, more please. Your writing and depiction inbreeded in the pages of this story is amazing. Please keep on writing and when I reach the conclusion of the Keeping of Lena, again, I will be begging and pleading for more. Thank you
I keep coming back to your page looking for the next story or update. Thank you for the time you give to your eager fans. Love your work.
sherrylee
Though it is an old comment, I'm sure there are many more like it. Please disregard the rudeness of others. Your time and storytelling efforts are much appreciated.
Can't believe the bloody cheek of some people. Writers have lives other than here. The stories post when they post. I appreciate them whenever they're posted. This is an excellent series or novel/novella. I'm thoroughly enjoying your writing. Thank you.
Pls when are we getting the rest ....
I can't wait ....pls pls plssss
I just discovered the Taking of Lena and this first chapter of the Keeping of Lena. I am enraptured by this story and am so eager for more! Definitely a premium story, far above the expectations I've had from Literotica offerings.
Love this story SO SO SO much really hope you come back and finish it <3
Yet ANOTHER lie from this 'writer' 15/3/17 chapter 2 will be posted this week, 11 days later still waiting, but then what can we expect from a writer who also lied about White Christmas chapters being posted as soon as the previous one posted back in EARLY January, still waiting there too.
So please ablondegoddess, stop bloody lying and post what you said you were going to.
Please dont promise if its not coming. I was so excited at new years when you said Lena would finally be up that next week. 3 months later you finally update and say a week which has now passed. You have people that love this story and I think its kinda of wrong to make false promises. Maybe just dont say anything until its done and submitted. Hope all is well.
Why would anyone ever expect you to keep your word? You said a week and yet here we are. Just admit you have no respect for your fans or your own timetable.
This has been my favorite story to date. I will be stalking for more. Thank you for an amazing story.
I see some impantient people here and on Tumblr blog that really triggers me to write this.
Let me get this straight - the author's NOT obliged to submit a story in a set amount of time. Life has a lot of commitments. Only when those commitments are fulfilled then author can have free time to pursue this hobby.
Let's just savour the fact that we are fortunate that author shares with us the amazing LENZ story. In the meantime, explore other options to entertain our minds.
As an avid anon reader of the vast store of fiction on these pages, I always find it bizarre to find a wonderful tale, wonderfully written that sets the reader up with an entire cast of interesting characters and plot lines....and then it just STOPS. Is there a syndrome at work here? it's so edgingly not fair. Lena needs more. Oh my Lord needs more. The nefarious evil- doers need more...need I say more? Please....the last possible plea. Continue.
I just realized I haven't begged anyone to do anything more than I've begged "ablondegoddess" to continue the story of Lena and Renz. I personally think this is hilarious :D
Lena & Renz! I never thought I'd see them again and then JOY, I finally saw the long awaited "The Keeping of Lena"! This story has been at the top of my most wanted list since you told us you were working on it. And you've hooked me again. But now I'm in the depths of despair seeing how long it's been since you posted. I'm BEGGING you to post the next chapter as soon as possible. 😩 At least please check in with us to let us know you're still there? Pretty please? I gave you five stars and would give you the moon too if I could. 🌖 See? 😃
Your eternal fan,
~K.
Wtf is your problem. Please come back. And finish Lena and Renz' story. Please.
PLEASE finish the story of Renz and Lena. I NEED THEM TO FINALLY BE HAPPY TOGETHER AND END UP FOREVER WITH EACH OTHER. Please for the love of GREAT writing