All Comments on 'The Lilac Society Ch. 04'

I love this story!! Great writing!!

Wow! Great Chapter! I hope we wont have to wait 2 years for the next chapter. This story is too good!

At the end of the story i released my breath,then i thought would i make the grade with such a society,and would i have the stamina for it.i prefer not to think what would happen to me if i did not.

I also thought,thank god this is impossible.

Too good! Next part please!

I’m a big fan of this series. After two years I’d stopped expecting a new part. I’m so glad to be proven wrong!

Hadn’t realized their where so many pathetic wimps in the world.

While I'm enjoying heading toward this story's end after restarting it after 1-2 years away, not finishing it the first time, I have a couple comments: 1. You use "droor" rather than "drawer" several times. Why? I've never seen "droor" used before. 2. If Lauren is a runner competing in races as long as half-marathons, she will almost certainly have calluses on her feet, and for runners, calluses are a good thing since they prevent blisters. She might want to leave this level of foot care, along with her pedicures, to a professional, but Chris/lauren's will still have to work around it.

Such a great story. Very thoughtfully written. The language is so clear it put me right there. Thank you for writing it! Please write more now that you have developed these characters.