All Comments on 'The Lone Wolf Ch. 03'

The first two chapters were a bit slow, but this mating chase was intense.

good writing style, but get a editor.

I will keep a lookout for updates to this story. I'm interested in where you're going to take this story.

"---get *an* editor."

I like this story a lot, and can't wait to see where you go from here. Looking forward to chapter 4. :)

Some reviewers, however, are obsessed with the principles of writing. Don't get discouraged by them. After the first two chapters of harping about tense, readers should just accept that this is your story to write as you want. I'm on Lit to read and enjoy a good adult story on a free site for fledgling writers to hone their skills or just tell their stories for fun. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Yves

An old girlfriend of mine use to let our dog fuck her. One of the most powerfully erotic sights I have ever seen watching her get knotted with Sampson! Watching her orgasm as he jack-hammered his cock into her made me blow my load over her face and hair every time without fail

Great story!!

I have really enjoyed the story arc that you have set up. Sometimes when I read stories on this website, the plot weighs down the writing, but you have kept pace with the charecters, giving appropriate exposition when it fit, yet allowing the reader to be in the moment and experience the present through the charecter's eyes.

Nola's reasons for being a loner are spelled out, and you've piqued my interest wondering just why Cedric is a loner, what his abilities are, and why he has been cast out. The mystery keeps me checking daily!

Sorry about the one star, this story turned me on so much my finger accidentally hit it. Keep writing these short but sweet stories!

the entire thing was amazing! This is probably the first porn story I have read with a good plot! Can't wait for Chapter 4

This is hot! Please don't keep us in suspense. As for editing, it's great compared to many other authors. As for the comments about it? Either offer useful criticisms, as in...would you like somehelp....or just shut up and read an English lit book instead. I'm so tired of pretentious idiots on this site. (Sorry for the rant.....I'll step off my soapbox.). Your work is just so well blended it needs to be continued!

Can't wait till the next chapter!

This story is great, but we've been waiting ages for the next chapter. Is chapter 4 going to come out soon?

Please write the next chapter soon I love this story and check everyday to see if its updated. Its too good to just leave unfinished. Please keep on writing!

I voted 1 star because this story has not been finished; don't know about the rest of you, but I am growing tired to these authors not completing these stories.

Why isn't this a book??

Why did you stop writing? This shouldn’t be the end. They never met as humans. He never knew of her gift and she never knew about him being banished. There’s so much more to this story.

I sure hope you intend to continue this story! This has been, so far, an incredible story! Please keep writing, I love this story!!

Please make more I love it so much

Great story just getting really interesting please continue writing

Good read. Waiting for more. Please continue the story.

interesting start, unfortunately not continued.

one aspect that bothered me was, Nola and Cedric story-wise could've been the same person.

For the parts with Nola you could change the name to Cedric it would be nearly the same, as the other way around of course apart from a couple details.

Storyline-wise though it was still interesting enough.