All Comments on 'The Park Bench'

Reminds me of some wild times in London and Paris with a wonderful French lady. Some women seem to love the risk--and it was worth it!!

and its done without any cheating or wimp men.

Congratulations, keep writing more like this.

Just a great read also no cheating going on it was still erotic.

Thank you for showing all your sides..But no doubt there is many more facets..

Great short story Art.

Great Job...& You're Welcome, darlin'... you know I'm always glad to help You... <grin>

Keep up the good work, sir.. you're wonderful.

*Shianne*

Good story Art, naughty but nice. I'm tired of cheating wife stories, it's nice to read a story like this.

Even better the second time around!! ~wicked smile~

Oh Art you had me going on this one. Yummy, lovely and oh so good enough to read a few times. You never cease to amaze me with your writing. Always, E

I felt like I was right there, peeking behind the tree in the park as the two lovers made the most of their lunch hour! This was a refreshing story because it proves that MARRIED couples CAN keep their love and sex life alive. Thank you Art, you are so vividly talented!

~Ashleigh

I compliment you and your proofreader. That second set of eyes make a lot of difference. I am normally pretty tough on you and I didn't find any apparent problems.

While the story was just the quick sex act, it flowed well and was believable. Very good.

jim : )

it just proves that there is still true love in this world.

Can you imagin, a story on Literoctica that doesn't have a slut or wimp in it.

I hope when im married my marriage will be as exciting as this read was, me being only 20 I really hope I can find someone now and be faithful with her with little adventures like these. It seems so interesting and fun thanks for the read this story made my day <3

Unexpectedly good story.