All Comments on 'The Porn Star Next Door Ch. 24 End'
by SteveWallace
- 9 Comments
Overa!!, Loved the series, would love to.see how they handle when one of them gets pregnant. Thanks for sharing.
5 stars for the whole series. Hope you have another series waiting in the wings. Please!!!???
I would love to see you return to this story at some point in time. The ending seemed rushed, but it sets up for a pretty good sequel premise.
The focus could be on a recruited student who is in their last year of studies from a cold weather university like Cornell, MIT, Brown, Princeton, NYU, Columbia, U Mass-Amherst or Carnegie-Mellon, (or a group of such students), showing the recruitment process with Doug, Sarah, Lisa, Lindsey, Shay, Tiffany, Logan, Sandy, Greg, Brad, Tyler, Crystal and Grace making appearances during the story, with the eventual story shifting to Sarasota. Throw in at some point a porn star trying to transition into the industry from Southern California who is graduating from a school like UC San Diego, UC Irvine, UCLA, USC, or Cal Tech to be the love interest. The nerd could be a girl and the porn star could be a male, with both being in their mid 20's. Just some ideas for a sequel.
Make it a 24 chapter story like this series and do an outline of that story while you work on your next series or one off story. That way you can plan out the major conflicts/resolutions and events in the story, then fill in the details once you are ready to work on it.
Loved the series. Couldn’t wait for the next installment. Great job, very well written.
Great series of stories. Would like 1 or 2 more chapters concerning babies coming along with all the new relationships. Maybe Jim And Dot turn the motel into a swinger resort. Maybe Charlotte and Nikki get into porn after talking with Sarah and Lindsey. Just some ideas!
It’s a very good story. Any chance of a storyline about AIA. That seems very intriguing.
Great story line, fantastic and interesting characters throughout the stories many chapters. You may want to consider selling your stories on Amazon ( I suggest looking at Burnt Redstone an author here on Literotica.). Keep up the great story writing and Thank you for sharing your Talent with us!
Great series, would love to see more on the AIA, and Sarah and Charlotte considering and havung Dougs kids and Charlotte being a protégé of Lindsey and maybe labeled Candy sweets relative in the industry