All Comments on 'The Preacher's Wife Ch. 01'
by chunkyd1
- 13 Comments
Love to see more adventures of the preacher's wife forced to give in to even more
Next time you write a story or continue this one leave out all the ". . ." nothing is gained from having them. For a pause just use a coma (,) or end the sentence.
Nice little Sunday read. Very good writing. Do let us hear from Cathy again soon. I'm sure many in the congregation will want a piece of her if Taylor convinces her to go braless and others sense her vulnerability and submissive personality.
Unless over used. "..." is a longer pause than a comma. Perfectly useful and found in many best selling novels. Unfortunately, over used by novice writers.
Maybe the maintenance man had to learn how to change diapers as well in a few short months?
The idiot who is worried about the "'s must be gay. I know that is why I read stories here so I can grade them never for the reason they were written, like maybe enjoyment.
Needs to be longer. Keep the wife in future stories with other men of the church, or the boys of the church?
In the paragraph 26 it tells of her stopping by her neighbors for some spiked lemonade:
"What . . . what do you mean?" she asked, trying not to slur, wishing she had had some gum, wishing that her neighbor had told her what was in the lemonade she was serving. Cathy had had three big glasses, and
it was nearly the first time she had been drunk.
An older Cathy has not cheated in a few years when the 18 year old neighbor comes to her house to ask for some tips on dating . He claims he is inexperienced and doesn't want to get embarrassed on his date . She is hesitant but he convinces her to show him how he should kiss his date for the first time. She wants to stop after a minute or 2 but he talks her into letting him get more practice. He ask her what it means to get to 2nd and 3rd base as he has heard these terms but doesn't know what they are. She says that he shouldn't think about that on the first date but he talks her into explaining what it means. He keeps kissing her (for practice) and although she tries to stop him he slowly goes for second and 3rd base. She struggles but can't stop him from getting her clothes off and then he takes her hand and makes her stroke his cock. (12 inches and thick) As she is telling him to stop he plunges all 12 in in her at once...........he keeps this up for awhile and flips her over and does her doggy before taking her ass. As he leaves he says how sorry he is but thanked her for the lesson. The next day a friend of the boy comes to cathys house claiming that he is there to pick something up that her husband left for him She reluctantly lets him in and the same thing happens as the day before with the other boy. write something like this