All Comments on 'The Sex Shop'
by SammyBabeDD
- 48 Comments
Good read. I would have preferred he pull out and cum all over her big tits. But not bad. Keep writing.
Pretty hot, but the jumping between 1st and 3rd person was really annoying and disrupted the flow.
Very nice story. It gets really exciting in some parts.
I think sticking with the first person narrator would have made it far hotter.
Seeing and knowing only what the girl is seeing herself adds to the danger and anticipation in the reader 's mind.
Good job for a debutante!
Jo
Part 2 is needed where Harry blackmails this girl & ultimately these 2 fall in love
Great premise.
Didn't deliver, at least not for me.
Rushed. Coarse. Lacks real eroticism.
Two stars.
Another great story Sammy. You are quite the author. Better than the first one i read. It was intense
Fantastic story! Would love to work with you, maybe a collab? I'm on Deviantart TheDudeMan007 :)
Amazing Story!!!! Loved the setup and one should know the risk of entering these stores!! This had me hard from the beginning. Great writing and please keep at it!!
Great writing of a short sex story. Tension and detailed sex, please write more!
Wow Sammy, an amazing story. So real and so great a description. I loved it all and am quite sure I am going to love part 2. Thanks for the good work
Well done. Your style made me feel like a voyeur watching the action live. I hope she visits again to try out some other toys. Or to be Harry's toy.
Good story! I would love to find the toys for my own use! The Sex Store could be such a good location for more chapters or scenarios. Keep writing!
Love this story! I was hard and stroking just thinking of that summer dress and those big tits! Surprised I didn't explode before I finished . . ready for Pt. 02.
It would be hot to see those big tits used like that! Great stuff. Thanks so much!
Okay, good premise but your writing style made me crazy. Switching between first person to third person POV was rough. Find a voice.
very sexy story and stroking myself throughout... can't wait for more!
I would stick to either first or third person, but overall it was pretty fucking hot. I didn't reach orgasm, but I think part 2 will push me over the edge ;)
sorry i missed you in chat... would like to 're-enact' this or something similar!
Loved it. so sweet and innocent to start lol and then...well. great descriptions and so easy to follow and believe it all. I will work on part 2 when i get a chance
Loved the sexshop story part 1 Such great descriptions and so hot . Fun to read and imagine. will red more soon. keep up the good work
Keep writing Sammy, you got my imagination into overdrive, and more! 😉
Wow, Sammy! Such a hot story...I love how sensitive your nipples are. So much that you cum from them being played with. That is hot!
Very hot Sammy, love this theme, it’s a fantasy of mine to hook up with a slutty woman in a sex shop. 🔥🔥
Hot story. Very descriptive. It makes me feel almost as if I'm in the shop with you. And I certainly wish I was!! I can't wait to read more!
Mmm loved the buildup.. Enjoying the fact that Harry was such a perv.. Not caring because you're so turned on.
Incredibly delicious and so damn HOT
I love….LOVE BIG TITS
I’m a tit man and big bOObs ate my kryptonite
I love making love to a Williams breasts. And love suckling on them and getting milk
I’m rough tho. And I love to bite
Amazing story. Now on to read more.