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Click here"So the reason you never invited me over..."
"Right. I was nervous about how you'd react to Becca."
Elaine didn't know whether to be horrified, intrigued or...aroused? Different parts of her were pulling in different directions.
"So, is Becca happy?"
Gwen considered the question for a few moments, then shrugged.
"I can't honestly say. She has a lot of what she loves and very little of what she hates. That's one definition of happiness, right?"
Elaine was quiet again, seeing her ex-girlfriend in a new light but still not sure what to make of it. Gwen had finally been honest about her situation...that counted for something. She hadn't pulled any punches. She'd shared something deeply personal, something extremely important to her.
On the other hand, her behaviour toward Becca had been manipulative, deceitful and selfish.
But ONLY towards Becca...Gwen had always been loving, considerate and thoughtful towards Elaine. And hadn't Becca brought some of it upon herself by abdicating her responsibility for self-determination?
"Anyway, I'm sorry for waiting this long to tell you. I get that it's a lot to digest. You're probably going to need some time..." Gwen said.
"Yeah, I think so. This...is a lot. You'll have to give me some time."
Gwen stood up, took Elaine's hands and gave them an affectionate squeeze.
"I meant what I said. I love you and I want you, now and always. Give me a call if you want to talk more."
Elaine nodded and walked Gwen to the door.
"Drive safe out there. I'll be in touch."
The two embraced briefly, then Gwen stepped out and Elaine locked the door behind her.
She poured herself another cup of tea and sat in the booth, deep in thought...
**
The End.
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Author's footnote:
This completes the main 'Gwen-Becca' arc of the story. I'm wondering if anyone would enjoy a new Elaine-Gwen-Becca sequel, or if I should leave it as-is. Please leave me your thoughts on the matter...
- COMMENTS
The edging, orgasm denial and control, and the gentle domming while nursing are perfection.
I am unsure how Elaine or any human could contemplate not calling the police on a sociopath like Gwen.
i hope elaine calls the cops and becca has everything stripped away from her <3
Still hopping for a sequel. An Idea: Becca with a blindfold is a beautiful naked woman with a blindfold. Change the blindfold to a swimmers goggles, paint the inside black to keep light out and paint them in beccas skin colour on the outside, and paint eyes on the outside of the glass. This will make Becca more like a doll and less human.
Hoping for first of many chapters of the sequel.
Sincerely Yours
Grey Master
This story is something else entirely. In a good way. It really got me thinking, on the one hand I find the setting extremely intruiging. It could have easily gone in a completely different direction, developing in a 'healthy' relationship. Many requirements such as commitment, responsiblity and care were already met, yet there was no 'love' present. I find it quite difficult to imagine people being that close without being partners in that sense. Yet you did a good job picturing their motives, the thought process was intereting to wrap your head around.
I'd love to read another chapter or sequel. This story is quite unique and a gem in it's category. Also I adore your style of writing. Hope there is more to come.
I would very much see your continuation of this story.
Sincerely
Grey Master
I think the ending was appropriate, but the potential scope of a sequel opens for many new things to occur without rehashing the previous content. Love the writing. Looking forward to anything else you write. Outstanding quality.
Just stumbled across this and think its incredible. I love the matter of fact dominance that Gwen has over Becca. Its unforced, but absolute. I would love to see the continuation of this. In my opinion, the harsher the better. I loved the scene where she was casually doing her work while her slave was acting as a footrest and licking her soles. I loved it even more when she took a break to use her as a toilet and then casually went back to work. There was a video clip with a girl...I think her name was Eris, where she was using her slave girl's face as a footrest, resting her feet full weight on her slave while her slave struggled to lick her soles. She even put her foot back on her mouth while she was speaking. That scene reminded me of that clip which is hands down one of my favorites.
It was fun seeing how her obsession grew and seeing how she manipulated Becca, but I think I wanted a more intimate drive from Gwen. She didn't really care for Becca, she just wanted someone to need her and only her. It's an interesting take, but without an emotional connection, it kinda fell flat. The hottest moment in the full story was when she first told Becca to hold her ankles at the end of the very first week. She did so out of anger and lust, and honest, that's when the story peaked. From then on, it was still good, but never as engaging as that first encounter. As she took more control, the stakes disappeared, and it kinda became predicable and lost its marvel.
Also, we never got to know more about Becca as a whole. In school she was active in sports and had a life. She literally became a nobody, that does nothing all day. It was just a little too unbelievable for someone that had a chance at a social life to give up everything because she thought she was a sub.
All-in-all, I'd give this story a seven. It was written well enough, it just lacked motivation for the characters, and an actual ending (payoff).
For me this is a difficult one. Again the detail and the writing are superb. Once again as in Her Governess you get carried along with the narrative but as the author says thus is a darker story and I have to confess to having reservations as it appears all Becca's independence and ability to act for herself have been stripped away.
A sequel - I think that's at your discretion and I'm sure you have ideas. One thing is a must - don't give up on writing as you have real skills. Her Governess is one of my top favourites.
I'll stick my neck out and say I think a sequel is inevitable. I'm fairly certain you already decided that when you fixed on the "ending". However, I don't have any idea as to how it will continue, or even if you will take on board any of the wishes and suggestions in the readers' comments.
My thoughts on the sequel? I think it's entirely your decision, and you should ignore the suggestions. In fact I suspect you might have already decided to do that.
I'll keep to myself what I would choose, but will be interested to read the sequel and find out how they compare or contrast.
As you yourself know, Gwen has been manipulative and essentially deprived Becca of ever having a normal live. No job, friends or family ever. And what if Gwen died on the way home from work in a car accident? Becca would probably die and even if she didn't, she'd never be able to take care of herself. Despite that, it was a well written, wonderfully told story of a girl losing her identity. I too would like to see the story continue with Elaine, but I'd like Elaine to temper Gwen's control of Becca and try to put her in the position of surviving outside Gwen's orbit. My two cents worth.
I would love to see at least one more chapter with Elaine entering the scene with Becca and Gwen... please