by RCscrudato
It's the old show business saying, leave them wanting more. My theme as gay sex with a best friend and brother and dad. If Sam starts hooking up with guys at the Gym or Mom gets involved, it gets away from my core. I assume readers like a focused story and try ti keep it that way. This one, voyeurism, best friend, brother, dad.
Proof Read. You are getting sloppy. Get someone else to proof read for you. Will make the the story smoother to read without the sudden bumps of wrong word, etc. Really like the story line. Keep going.