by rin_tin10
I'm no incest expert, but I thought this was quite unusual and a good story. Loved the reconciliation angle, taken to the nth degree. RT
Wayy too rushed, would've liked 2 or 3 mor pages to smooth the reconcile and give the sex and ending more room to not feel rushed
Very well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The characters had depth, there was a realism to the emotions and settings. I've published several books and so know how hard it can be to craft a good story. Nicely done.
Loved the story... I'm not so sure about the instant hate between the twins though.
'Love is a Many Splendora Thing'... really? You're giving away your age author.
Thanks for sharing your work
No matter about ages, this one was worth the read. Good overall, nice bringing it all together. That sibling, even twin hate is not all that uncommon, been there myself, maybe still there. A matter of social standing, from the other side of the coin though.
Drawback is the anal scene. No full marks on scoring