Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereA year later she had a little sister, Janice.
I am sitting on Bobbie's bed in the hospital, holding Janice. Carrie is holding Nathan, while she sits on the other side of the bed.
"Bobbie, I think mom and dad weren't failures, after all."
fin
- COMMENTS
No matter about ages, this one was worth the read. Good overall, nice bringing it all together. That sibling, even twin hate is not all that uncommon, been there myself, maybe still there. A matter of social standing, from the other side of the coin though.
Drawback is the anal scene. No full marks on scoring
Loved the story... I'm not so sure about the instant hate between the twins though.
'Love is a Many Splendora Thing'... really? You're giving away your age author.
Thanks for sharing your work
Very well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The characters had depth, there was a realism to the emotions and settings. I've published several books and so know how hard it can be to craft a good story. Nicely done.
Wayy too rushed, would've liked 2 or 3 mor pages to smooth the reconcile and give the sex and ending more room to not feel rushed