All Comments on 'Velvet'

What a beautiful story. Not just the sex, but the lovely way they made love and loved each other to perfection. Can't wait for more.

Do you know what was wrong with that? It left me wanting more! And more. I could get addict to such good writing...

Lukas

The only thing I would have done more of would be to give more graphic description of the tingly tactile feelings of the bodies touching, the intensity of the feelings in the genitals--especially considering who they are. It is hot.

give more a lot more,don't stop

I appreciate the kudos. It's my first time submitting.

I was asked if I personally know about this type of union. I do not. I wouldn't know what type of advice to give. Mother-son erotica is just a favorite fantasy of mine. I am trying to incorporate it within my marriage. My wife is actually older than me (which fits the bill. :))

Thanks again!

Ernest Hemingsex

realy great got me very horny good sex, of any kind good writing. thank you keep it up

very sexy and hot....definitely got very hard...looking forward to the next installment!

i wud say this is the best story i've read so far!!

Thanks so much for the compliments, esp from India. Appreciate it.

I await the next instalment with frenzied indifference.

I've seen a better plot in a vegetable garden and more romance in a gas chamber.

What a beautiful line. Nothing compares with a boy blowing his young balls up his mother's mommy-hole. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.

A beautiful coupling! Well worded and erotic. Definitely makes this mature mom horny!!!

my son read this over my shoulder and wanted to reenact it with me. we just finished making love and i am playing with his cum in my pussy right now ;-)

To quote Paris Hilton: That's hot!

Your story is intriguing in the sense that you started the tale at the middle if not end of the story.

story bust. just another fuck story...

Putting the conclusion at the beginning isn't for me. The rest of the stories will be anticlimactic. I won't be reading on.

Almost a 1 star but gave it 2.

Don't care to read anymore of this.