All Comments on 'Village Comes in City'

Get yourself buggered by Musharraf to learn about fucking !

it went on and on, boring, I stopped reading, yawn. Crappy writing.

I actually liked the way you built this experience. It took a while, but I enjoyed it. I would have liked more details of the aunt's pussy - the feel, the smell ...

Very well put together. I like this kind of sex - long and slow and seductive - both to read and for real. A very charming story.

My thanks to the author for taking the time to write and giving a really pleasurable read. - Gillian.

Superbly written. Not the usual "fuck every hole" story.

It had a beautiful build up. Keep up the good work.

An amazing piece of erotica. Very well written and articulated. The tension is built up very slowly and perfectly shown at all points of the story. The theme of the story is also very realistic and believable. Kudos to the writer.

Extremely erotic - a situation that as a leg-obsessed adolescent I would have died for!

Desighee really builds the tempo. The story is highly erotic

& I have seen such aunts who really want a young stud to arouse them & make them happy.

Look forward for more such stories

ya lil hawal ya foolish freak retard liar. you and yo aunt gonna go straight ta hell for zina and comitting shit like that. im gonna call yo fuckin house right now inform yo daddy and get you fucked in the ass. yo crappy writin sux dick. naeem t7 ha3 hi kis3 kan'3jar!

I think that was one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. keep up the great work.

great

Good premise.

Nicely told.

Good buildup.

Sex, when it finally happened, was nice, but lacking.

He massaged her ass. He could have kissed it. He could have done it without prompting or she could have asked him if he liked it, and did he want to kiss it to show her how much,

Nothing with her breasts at all? Too bad.

Neither he nor she considered the possibility of him kissing/tonguing her pussy?

Four stars.