All Comments on 'Well Made and Enduring'

I found it hard to follow. I had to reread the opening paragraphs three times to understand it and I am still not sure I do.

While a lack of speech is not automatically bad it does allow you to work through each concept.

The first paragraph should have mentioned that she was on a date. This was mentioned in paragraph 2 but still left me wondering why this woman was intruding on their date and not being told to go away.

Have you read "Little Sister" by the same author? It would not have been so confusing if you had.

PPZ

I was re-reading the whole saga when I noticed this story. You continue to flesh out a very entertaining story. I'm awaiting the next expansion of some great character development.

Too confusing at the start. It made no sense at all. Couldn't even work out which was his date. You wrote that they bothvseemed to be dating him?

To author. If this is a continuation of another story you should either use same title with ch1, ch2 etc, or at least use the added title comments to say is part 2, or just put a note at the start of the story.

Otherwise this is taken as a standalone and should contain all necessary information.

I still dont know who was dating whom and why she was bad nouthing somebody. It should have been addressed there and then.

The conclusion (part #3) to this story should be up shortly.

There is now a preface chapter, Pt. 00. It is listed as next part, but should be read first.

hard to follow, but engaging