All Comments on 'Wife gives Coed to Hubby for B-Day'
by Alladinzane
- 18 Comments
Funny, tales where the husband has his wife sleep with others get like a 1.0 and death threats. Story where wife 'gives' hubby a woman gets fairly high review numbers. Bit of hypocrisy, ya think?
I honestly can't recall the number, nor the number of types, of mistakes, & for that reason, I didn't even read the whole thing!
I loved your story, mostly because I was "Jen" while a senior in college. I was very friendly with a school librarian and she invited me to fuck her handsome, 45ish husband. I did and she loved watching. It became a regular date for the 5 months prior to my graduation. Write more.
Based on the e familiarity between the two women, no way that morning was the first time they “touched”. It looks like Melinda is/was having an affair based on the story setup. No mention of issues beyond a couple words left a gap for me. 4*
Whoa! Gone for a few days and come back to this! I feel like some of us may have forgotten this is just a story. We do this for fun. Everyone please relax. Thank you for the handful of positive reviews and spelling/grammar critiques are always welcome.
Really...........is there a fantasy cat in Literotica? If so then this story needs to go there!
I liked it, it fully turned me on! One suggestion would be to outline how hot the man found his wife (the story does say that she's hot but some specific details or a similar dedication to describing the wife's looks as is given to the young hottie's looks would be great). Women reading this would be turned on or at least reassured knowing that the man is still very attracted to his wife despite her age. Alternatively, the wife cohld have asked for a guy for her bday. Would not fit the storyline as well though.
The above suggestion aside, I thought this was a fantastic read. Lots of passion and lots of detail that allowed me to "be there". Thank you!
I'm just LMAO at the jealous people who's stories don't get high ratings. You don't like a story fine. Just remember ITS A FANTASY. Like a Marvel or a Saw movie it's just make-believe. Don't pretend to be a SJW just because your preferred stuff doesn't get as many views. Great story btw.
I can't seem to find these endless ammounts of misspellings.
Also, a VERY large ammount of stories that are above 4 stars have less than 20, or even 10 comments on them.
If you are going to write a troll review at least try a bit so you can trick at least one person into believe you, honestly, some people, lol.
Fun! So where is the follow-up? "Melinda's bondage birthday" sounded like it would be fun. Hope that story is still on your "to-do" list. Maybe get one of his construction workers to help out too?