All Comments on 'Wife's First Adventure'

But why do you or the couple in the story feel you need to share? if something is missing from your sex life go see a therpist or ask a family member. There is no need to go out and do this swinging thing and when are you going to tell your son that you have other partners, I'm sure he will be over the moon to know.

I wonder why the reader needs to read stories like this when he believes there is no reason to write them

So you're saying every single story is exactly the same? You have to, otherwise your comment makes no sense at all. Therefore, the ALL deserve low ratings for being mindless repetitions of the same crap.

When a writer wants to express himself in a work of fantasy, then that is usually a personal thing to the writer. Everyone else might think it's not any good, but it not every-one's fantasy. I think the writer is doing well,but he has some problems with English, not enough to influence a bad score though.If you think of the intent of the story, and the fantasy was that of seeing his wife getting fucked by another man, then that's what this story is. Nothing more or nothing less. just a fantasy. Well done author, hope that you will share some more of your thoughts with us....Rich

you did not start anything. what would you explain to your son when everybody found out your wifes a bitch and you a wanker. Tell you, pretty nice to go to school next day. so play the fantasy road with your wife, this way you win, the other way you might even loose her.

I think the story is good. I don't agree with the ppl that have been flaming the author all this time. A fantasy is a personal thing, there are no rules or guidelines as to how a fantasy should be. freedom of speech anyone? But the overal I think it was a very brave thing for the author to post his story. I wish him luck in making his fantasy come true if that is what he wants.

I read a comment on a similar story recently. It was a genuine comment where the writer said that he/she thought that by the title of the stories 'loving Wives' they were going to read about happy marriages, romance if you like. Maybe the heading for such stories needs to be changed to 'Wife Sharing' or something. I enjoy these stories and this one was a good read. To those who knock such themes with their stupid moralistic comments (on an adult site!), why did you read it? There is one moron worried about the writers son. I didn't know he HAD one! It's a story, if you don't like the theme don't read it. I don't read gay male stories, stories about incest, sci fi etc because they don't interest me but I recognise that they do interest others so each to his own. Write on

Hey, your slut wife met Mark without condom. Did she get pregnant from Mark? If yes what is that story?

Miss Samidha

I really wanna be mark, I'll do anything to hae her, anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wish i was Lisa xD

Your wife sounds like a woman that I would love to have for the weekend! What a way to spend a vacation!!! :)

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

if more folks would relax like this life would be wonderfull and all of us would feel more alive !

Very good and sexy

This is loving wives not the fetish category. Less than 1% of the male population are cuckolds. Why do you write this shit for such a small audience?

One woman, two men= cuck and whore story.

Sexy scenario but clinically written, passion and flavor lacking a bit. Emotion? Love? Cheers.

Bad spelling & grammer so I couldn't finish this story.

2 stars & I'm being generous...

Sorry