All Comments on 'Wife's New Career'

the winner...........jizz licking cuckold hubby......in for a life time of creampies

Just a dying ember of the real Flash Gordon.. who would have ditched the bitch because Flash had balls.

He needs to find out and take appropriate action

As a result it publishes fictional stories, not factual narratives.

"Hey! Such-and-such would never happen in real life!"

Yes and this isn't real life.

An interesting story. One plot problem, but hey, nobody is perfect.

You can write better than this. You should be ashamed.

I agree with MattblackUK. This is about fiction where anything goes. I had no problem with this story about a woman who does something that she secretly wanted to do for years in being exposed to people. That she took on the powers that control the sex wrestling and demanded that she be paid real money to be fucked is very good. Her husband doesn't need to know about everything. As the husband of a whore I know this. I love my wife and what she does/did does hurt some since I now know about it. So again, her husband is better off just knowing part of her new life. You could definitely do another chapter or two with this. Good Luck

... Is how casually the wife decided to become a whore.

In absolutely no time, she went from an amateur wrestler, to essentially a stripper, to a live-sex performer. We're talking about 24 hours, at the most, people!

Geezus, woman... just enter straight porn and/or escorting and be done with it.

I guess she knew her husband was too balless to say anything against it too - such carefree nonchalance, a true 'que sera, sera' attitude about his wife potentially getting some stranges 'accidentally' inside of her on a weekly basis...

Seriously, why are those two married again?

Anyway, this whole thing is pretty damn silly, but it's also too ludicrous to even be found entertaining as a simple flap story.

Complete dumbness can sometimes be a true boner killer.

The lack of consistency hurts the story a lot. As MightyHorny said she went from a housewife to a whore in a day without being in dire need of money. Even a cliche "My family is neck-deep in debt" would explain why she did what she did. Someone who is eager to get naked in public would not have waited until now.

Other things I didn't like was the lack of a proper twist, how you were moving from one scene to the next without narrating a few juicy details, the lack of descriptions of the opponents, and how she won despite having no experience. I would like to think that at least a couple of the other girls would be experienced. In general, you were in a hurry to reach the end and you skipped all the goos stuff in the middle.

It was kind I f entertaining right up until she negotiated with the promoter for the male wrestler to fuck her, then initiated the actual fucking and makes plans to keep doing it as long as husband doesn't find out.

Accidental insertion ithe course of an actual match, while hubby is sitting in the stands is one thing... Doing it on purpose just for the money... You lost me there