All Comments on 'Would You Rather Ch. 01'

Great story, and a great idea i will vote for A

Vote for B. Really nice concept.

Thanks! I like the concept of this story! Although it is a rather hard choice... but I think I go with B :)

B

Good story - go with A

Cute story. C. Someone with authority )male or female) checking on “Lights Out,” gets suckered into a Dare.

I hope you find a way to escalate these a bit more as the game goes on (with some fairly believable reason a girl would feel she has to go through with it). Of these, I’ll vote for A.

nice! I vote "B". Thank you!

B

Love it. I pick option A.

I think C, I like this concept, perhaps a fixed day for posting, 48 hours for the vote and that gives you 4 days to write to meet the next posting deadline, but it will be hard work to keep up.

Great idea, excited for this! I chose A

A

I vote for B

B all the way

B

I’ll choose A

I like the idea of C, exciting

I like mystery, so C

Great story, I'll go for A

Nicely done story. Great setting and concept. I vote for B

B

You write well! Like it ..

C. I would be happy to assist in editing, proofing, etc. I once played with this idea, but couldn't commit to the follow-up schedule it will require. However, in an assist role, who knows?

B

A

C. More possibilities

C

Before answering, I’m giving a bit of feedback/thinking behind the various options and the assumptions I’m making. I hope that’s ok.

A. I don’t see the point of the lapdance this early on and without any striptease involved. It would be better after some sexual tension had been created and, depending on where you plan to go with this, better used later on one or more members of the guys team. On the other hand the flash-your-boobs-until-seen option is my favorite of all the options. I, however, can’t see Lena taking it when it would be safer to give a lapdance UNLESS she’s doing it to set the bar for the other girls or to prove how fearless she is. (She’s already playing with her sole garment like she’s daring Zara to dare her to get her kit off.)

B. Since there is nothing about sticking around after knocking on the boys’ door, I assume Lena would interpret this as knock-and-bolt-for-cover. On the other hand, there are TWO rooms of boys so maybe she has to knock on both which adds something. There is also the enticing possibility that the other girls won’t let her back in their room right away until someone sees her. Of course then Lena will be spoiling for revenge. Also, random knocking might bring one or more of the guys knocking on the girls’ door at an “inconvenient” opportune moment as in C. Also, this would require Lena to PUT ON knickers which seems weird for some reason, possibly because it’s so much tamer that the questions Lena started with. The other option, handstands in the hall, seems tame although there is always the chance that someone or several people will come along since it’s only 8. One or more of the girls could also text some of the guys to come out in the hall for a show.

With both of the above, I feel like the choice should be more difficult, the options more on par.

C. I can’t see a Lights Out at 8PM for college women, sorry. If anything it’ll be one of the guys or maybe more girls on their team who end up playing. However, I think I prefer this least because I think having someone knock on the girls’ door would be much more interesting later, when one or more of them is naked and somehow unable to cover up.

Onnthe balance, if I had to pick one, I’d probably go with B although my preferred choice would be between flashing boobs out the window until seen and having to knock on both guy rooms’ doors and then try to WALK back to the girls’ room before the any guys answer the door.

Additional comments: It seems odd to me to have bunk beds in a motel. I’d have expected 2 queen beds with two girls each. That would presesome interesting opportunities for later as well. Maybe things are different in the UK.

It would be nice to know where the driver is lodged and any coaches etc.

Sorry if this was a bit long.

B)

A, the girls need to be revved up a little and then introduce the boys later

A. C can come after things have started to heat up

B

I vote for B

C for me

Perhaps something spicier with a terrible choice. Give Darren a blowie or strip for and masturbate.

C something new interesting.

"b" please and i do like this format

A !!!

So please to read you again !

A

B

B

B)

B

I like it so far: C

B seems best. Can't imagine escalating so quick

A

A

B :)

B :)

A

C will be better later on, once the girls have gotten some of their clothes off.

A

Then build up to B

C for me

A, but also, awesome story! The banter was so good that I would genuinely read this if it had little to no porn, good job!

No doubts, B.

A is my vote

I vote A

C

B please

I already gave my vote earlier, but I want to talk about my choice of B. Specifically for the folks who think the handstand might be too tame. Although I think 30 seconds might be too short, let's not forget what it will look like for Lena who is only wearing a t-shirt right now. Doesn't matter how "oversized" that t-shirt might be, it's definitely falling around her face; simultaneously showing off her body underneath and blocking her vision of any strangers who might happen by and catch the show.

B

B

B

C

C

B

I like the idea, hope you can keep it going! I vote A. Keep things inside the room for the first rounds.

Great idea. I vote B

Love the choose your own adventure idea. I vote B!

C

D - All of the above.

C with the spirit of B continued ;)

Fun concept!!

I vote B too

B

A

C

A

C

a

A

"Do you give that double-grip tornado-twist guck-guck three thousand?" 5 stars instantly.

A

B

B

Even though the next chapter is already written, I would have to vote for A.

But this is promising to be a pretty fun story either way ;->

A