All Comments on 'Writing Together Ch. 01'

Outstanding. Realistic premise with decent characters. And spelling and punctuation was perfect so no distractions

Hope to read more of your works; thank you

Oh, I'm liking the start of this....

I love it except for blatant grammar error in Samantha's second paragraph: "As a new faculty member and freshly minted Ph.D., he mentored me and coached me during my first few years as a professor". "he" is the subject of the sentence, and that opening clause should modify the subject, but it is modifying the object (the narrator). He is not the new professor, she is.

Otherwise, I love it, and want to see how their romance progresses. Good characters, and trading voices works very well. Fun "meta" story. Thanks for a good read.

Great beginning!

5

So looking forward to part 2. Thanks.

G

Great start! I'll let others more qualified than I do the critiques and find the mistakes. I'm loving the characters and the fantasy. Looking forward to the next episode.

Cheers

SAGE

I, too, have difficulty imagining romance and intimacy from the female perspective. I have a story idea that requires it, and a co-author in mind. Using this tale, I will be able to show her what I have in mind when I pitch it to her. Wish me luck.

I wanted to give this story a sixth star for the correct spelling of "vise". I'm looking forward to additional chapters.

Enjoyed it immensely!