All Comments on 'Yes, Daddy'

I know it is a work of fiction but this isn't even believable. A submissive story but not to my liking. Just my opinion.

I kept waiting for it to get better but it didn't.

This needs a lot of work. It has some potential but the author kept switching between 1st and 3rd person and doesn't really seem to understand that there isn't a magical submissive button on people. The daughter would have to be taught things like this "submissive pose" that gets mentioned multiple times.

good story any plans to finish it

Abuse at it's worst!

Terrible, not worth reading. Unbelievable that you submitted it literotica and they accepted it