All Comments on 'You Can Look But Not Touch'
by Pagon
- 6 Comments
the story was great,
i loved the intro and the sex was writen very well.
the last line of the story brilliant.
the british are the best authors.
KEEP GOING and write some more stories like this one please
When do we get the next part ? great story
I don't vote as a protest to the Goblins and Trolls. Hot story, lots of sex. Taking nonconcent to the next level. You really need to use an editor though, to take care of those nasty grammar errors. Keep writing.
It is the ( ha ha author') mind that has these fantasticaly unreal fantasies because he imagines him to be a rapist. Truth be known he couldn't rape a fly with his miniscule pee pee. To begin with I didn't read the whole thing...just enough to see that the writer was a dumbass. (Here look at this for a mouthful," he walked over to where his wife was sat at the computer, putting the two glass's down he lent over her shoulder, "And what mouthful of fuck fantasy are your little perverts telling you now?") These are the words he wrote on the first page of the debacle. First of all it's not WAS SAT it's WAS SITTIBG. Only a wimp Britisher or perhaps the same one that writes these perversions. Next he/she/it...hey that says he shit...funny ha ha...where he lent over her shoulder...how about LEANED dumb ass..not lent as some one lent something to someone else. He/she/it ( he shit again) you are as stupid as your stories...give up writing and stick to being stupid asshole