All Comments on 'You, Me & My Mom'

It still was a little too much "stream of consciousness" for me to really love it. You could have been a little more descriptive, but you honestly did do a nice job here. I'll give it four stars, and hope you'll get better with more practice.

One of the best stories that I've read in a while. Thank you

Yes I liked the story but spell check it and proof read it, please. Thank you for the story.

are you reding the story or marking 4 A GCSE

Well it could have been good but... the constant use of 'you' killed it

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