All Comments on 'My First Submission'

Great story! Just needs more detailed scenes and a little editing. Keep up the good work!

A real story, so might not be that detailed, a slave's real start of submission

And drop the "real" story. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. The "real" tag does nothing for the story but make us laugh at you. This was a horrible story line. Both poorly thought out and badly executed.

1 star

Quite obviously nobody realizes you are from India. English is not your first language. That being said, I thought for first time submission it was excellent.