Love is many things, forgiveness, healing, patience, smiling, feeling the warmth of them even though they are far away.
What you two have is an inspiration to many of us.
We love your journey away.
A beautiful ode to a very special woman who means so much. My heart aches for you, yet sings with hope. An amazing woman once told me that poetry was the path of least resistance between my emotions and the page. I've always believed that and this proves it beyond doubt. xxxx
The turkeys are hilarious, and I can feel the rising and falling tension and conflict conveyed throughout this poem. I was expecting more from the lovely pond. Maybe that’s why the character wishes to return, and if so, will turkeys be waiting or something experientially different? The ending is perfect. I love the bright, warm, and other sensual elements. Five stars, Ana.
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Thank you Mama ❤️❤️
Truly lovely, Pixie. Made me cry. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ and 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟
Thank you so much xxxxx
I love y’all two..#relationshipgoals
Love is many things, forgiveness, healing, patience, smiling, feeling the warmth of them even though they are far away.
What you two have is an inspiration to many of us.
We love your journey away.
Thank you so much, Meg xxxxxx
Thank you, Tasha xx
Thank you Elle xxx
This poem makes me want to get a cat.
Gorgeous piece. Mesmerizing imagery. Uplifting theme.
I love your word placement for emphasis and the poetic element of repetition.
It's triumphant.
Meg
Very lovely sentiments , wonderful imagry too.
Beautiful
A beautiful ode to a very special woman who means so much. My heart aches for you, yet sings with hope. An amazing woman once told me that poetry was the path of least resistance between my emotions and the page. I've always believed that and this proves it beyond doubt. xxxx
The turkeys are hilarious, and I can feel the rising and falling tension and conflict conveyed throughout this poem. I was expecting more from the lovely pond. Maybe that’s why the character wishes to return, and if so, will turkeys be waiting or something experientially different? The ending is perfect. I love the bright, warm, and other sensual elements. Five stars, Ana.
Thank you xxxx