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The Second Coming

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My poetic interpretation of Da Vinci's 'Salvator Mundi'.
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Ten, nine, eight,
seven, six, five, four
Behold, I knock upon the door
that whosoever… three, two, one
We have ig-ni-tion.

Orian sighs and by his breath,
all life returns from after death.
A swarm of ships from Heaven’s realm
amass and duly overwhelm
the somber dark before the light.
A thief has come unto the night.

Swirling spheres that make no sound
split the sky and torch the ground,
zig and zag with proton speed,
phantoms of the galaxy.

Angels lead a vast descent
inside their shiny armament.
Spinning saucers grace the clouds.
Turin peels away the shroud.

Mountains quake and from their core
souls emerge from years before
like candles sparkling through the mist
that float into the deep abyss.

Judgement waves its heavy hand.
Lasers beam across the land.
Every being must atone.
Every secret shall be known.

The rich will fall. The meek will reign.
No hate or envy will remain.
Nirvana melds with Mother Earth.
Believers seek a second birth.

Across the black of outer space,
the stars align into the face
of God himself. The planets bloom.
We rise into the upper room.

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Paul4playPaul4play6 months ago

Wonderful collision of natural forces and spiritual fulfillment!

Rimbaud17Rimbaud176 months ago

I was reading this looking for subtle, subliminal sexual metaphors. If they're there, they're buried deep. But it's beautifully crafted eschatology. If you're into that. And a little beautifully terrifying if you're not.

MigbirdMigbird6 months ago

Poems and rhymes - get it for most part, but seemed overdone. Detracted from message/feeling.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwen6 months ago

The title of this poem's a tease

I thought it would show DK's ease

At fucking her lover

And then going again for another

Orgasm, but alas! There's no sleaze.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

So I read it again. It's quite hot

In fact, I like it a lot

Sex is a god-given gift

Which gives humans a lift

If you choose to fuck aliens (or not).

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Ten, nine, eight,

seven, six, five, four

Love it! Best intro to a poem ever.

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