- Erotic Poetry
- 1000 miles
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Click herethey had not connected,
he was on travel,
she was busy and preoccupied
worlds 1000 miles apart – until now.
primal, sweating, intense.
the fury – the fervor
the love making stopped long ago
this night was far deeper
for hours the passion raged non-stop:
he bored it,
he cored it,
every part of her – he explored it.
this was not the night for being a lady:
she clerked it,
she jerked it,
she even overtime worked it.
he couldn’t wait to be home with his baby:
he played it,
he splayed it,
he damn near filleted it.
she missed her man so much:
she made him poke it
she stroked it,
she rode so hard she almost broke it.
he needed all of her so much:
he chilled it,
he sealed it,
he quite near grilled it.
juices flowed everywhere
faces wrenched,
sheets drenched,
bodies clenched
they looked in each other’s eyes
and both said,
damn baby . . .I missed you.
- COMMENTS
Loved the rhythm of this! Your writing is playful, but it conveys something intense! LOVED this!
I love this poem!!!!! My man and I both travel for work and sometimes don't see each other for days sometimes even weeks at a time and this is what it is like when we see each other again . . . :)
I think you did a great job with this poem. It hits very close to home for me. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
I would suggest this verse "the love making stopped long ago
this night was far deeper"
might be better as the first two lines of that four line verse as the poem then picks up its frenetic pace that just runs away, also the three line finale as opposed to the four line verses is well done and a good closure.
A creative theme with well thought out tempo and flow..... There were some spots where the word choices were a stretch, but I too have such flaws in my compositions. Thanks for sharing...