- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A Blizzard Forever
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Click hereBlizzard beats
at a window pane
watching snow
build up
around the edges
lack of
anything better to do
little nose
pressed
against the glass
watching the cold
thinking back
of chilly days
can't play
wondering
why
there are
cold ways
Child knows
against the cold
his mind's
windows of pain
will always be
a blizzard
because
his parents fleed
will he be
forever
in a blizzard?
Wrap my arms
around him
wipe icicle tears
he knows love
and smiles at me
but doesn't understand
not having
his mommy
and daddy
neither do I~
so aunt and uncle
are now mom and dad
but one day
he'll go into the world
storming
searching
blizzards
wanting answers
why?
for I can't answer
the chilling question
or understand
cold hearts
two nose's
against the glass
when will
this blizzard pass?
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[i]dedicated to khristian, CJ and
templeminded[/i]
- COMMENTS
A beautiful rendering clothed in Pathos and an under tone of sadness. A little child living with an Uncle and Aunt tries to understand in a child's way ~ his missing parents. A Deep Heartfelt Poem.
I felt like I was there. Cold and alone...searching....so many questions unanswered. Then someone came and took me in....still questions, no answers. This is what I got from your poem. It tugged. Very heartfelt. If you can take me with you, you deserve a great mark :-)
a heartfelt thanks for all you are and all you do. hugs and kisses....just little old me :)
Wow.. Felt this go straight to my heart.Deep and so meaningful.Always searching for the answers to life, and seeking something that can never be. The images you painted are so heart felt..Loved it as always..