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Lovely sentiment
A lovely sentiment. But the poem is bland, flat and uninspiring. You need to engage the reader. An interesting angle, an original simile - something. Otherwise it's:
I love you
You love me
Together we are
both lovely.
Creative writing can be cathartic, but it doesn't always need to be shared.
Why are all the critics anonymous?
It's curious.
Maybe they're spurious?
They like to criticize
because they're furious
when someone simple's serious?
They're just delirious
and way too good for us.
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