- Non-Erotic Poetry
- i Love You
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Click hereI love you more day by day
I don't care if people say I'm gay
You are the only woman ever for me
I am who I am and you love me for me
I know I'm unorganized, messy, everything you're not
Yet you still say that your heart I have got
I cherish every moment that we have together
And I hope that these moments last us forever
We have something most people only dream of
Pure true satisfying love
A best friend who we've discovered as of late
That just happens to be our soul mate
You're the love of my life
A bright shining light
That shines on the paths
I walk day and night
You give me such drive
It's because of you I strive
To be the best I can be
For you, our kids, and me
The way you make me feel
It doesn't even seem real
You tell me I'm beautiful, pretty, and hot
These are the things I've always thought I'm not
And since our love has come about
You make me feel beautiful inside and out
I'm so happy we share a love so true
And I want you to know I LOVE YOU!
- COMMENTS
Why are all the critics anonymous?
It's curious.
Maybe they're spurious?
They like to criticize
because they're furious
when someone simple's serious?
They're just delirious
and way too good for us.
A lovely sentiment. But the poem is bland, flat and uninspiring. You need to engage the reader. An interesting angle, an original simile - something. Otherwise it's:
I love you
You love me
Together we are
both lovely.
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