- Erotic Poetry
- Indiscreet Thoughts on a Train
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Click hereThis will probably be the last one of the tankas I wrote during my long train journey that I'll share. Unless I change my mind about the actual last one, but so far every time I read it back, I didn’t like it enough to share. This particular one goes out to those whose thoughts run towards the indecent in less time than it takes a train door to shut.
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Cities and mountains
In the slowly setting sun
"The door will soon close"
But not before my mind sets
ablaze, breathing through my mouth
- COMMENTS
Thank you for the “Thoughts on a Train” series!
I take a train to/from work and have often used this time to reply to emails from my Lit friends.
It is unavoidable: I become aroused on the train.
Also, the train has many many desirable people of all races, colors, shapes and sizes, letting my fantasies run free!