- Erotic Poetry
- "Loving You..."
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Click hereHow my thoughts
are racing soooo...
I just whispered aloud -
"I love you...",
and have the softest feeling -
for real,
no teasing.
You 'get' to me so damnably easy...
I don't know or understand why
or how -
you just do.
It's because...
somehow... we... belong.
I know...
silly me.
I melt at some awkward times
and just shake my head at others.
But I want to hold you so tight
and make love to you
and hold you close afterward
and make love to you
and just 'be' with you
and love you.
Woman...the thoughts that just race by
physical... mental...
my stomachs a big knot
and I want to sing,
smile... just laugh...
shake it off...
but can't.
I want you curled with me,
around me,
on me.
I want to be in you -
a part of you...
held so very tight and close...
and never let go.
I want to touch you,
taste...
explore...
mentally, physically...
and more -
so much more.
I want to play
and 'be'
as only we can.
How my thoughts
are racing soooo...
such is the beginning
of 'loving' you...
silly me.
- COMMENTS
This certainly delineates that feeling of being in love, of loving competely and so well. It's wonderful and scary and delightful! I love it!
How real and sweet this is.....I have felt some of these very same feelings before..... :)
This poem sums up how I feel about a certain young lady in Australia. We were to meet this weekend, December 13th, but alas our plans were dashed. Now we'll have to wait two years.
I was really impressed with this poem..I've been reading the new submissions none had the emotion and sincerity that yours did..kudos..me likey ;)
This rendering comes accross as a warm intimate description of a man's tender affections. Lovely.
Your poems sound real. this one is conversational and has an intimate quality that comes less from the subject, imo, and more from its honesty.
See? I said I'd read it and I did! :)
Wow, your poem moved me, excited to read more of your work....