- Poetry With Audio
- Sweat
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Click hereThat one drop of lust could feed a famine
and I watch it, eyes slit, open-mouthed,
anticipating. The bead rolls down a
hard chest, a harder nipple where it's poised,
perpetually or so it seems.
The hang time is too tedious, starving
while waiting. I'm impatient.
One lick and it's a salty plenitude, albeit short-lived.
This dry spell really did last forever
and it's hot, I'll make him sweat a lot longer.
- COMMENTS
The next to the last line doesn't quite fit. Since it sounds like she/he's in the process of ending the dry spell something like...
My/our dry spell had lasted too long.
Would work better.
I liked the poem but the audio seemed too fast and unfeeling. I was expecting a slower sultry delivery to match the text and was therefore a bit jarred and put off by the audio.
But you still sound like Mini Mouse, a sexy little Mini. Thanks for giving voice to my poem.
one can always cause it. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s no stars available