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Click heretwisting, turning, pulsing, yearning,
in and out, a moan, a shout,
around my hand, my head, my heart,
where you end and where i start
blending, churning, ending, burning
it all away, fall away
'til all that's left is us.
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The 'rule' is don't use gerunds
So here we have gerund overkill
But the way it's done ~ it works.
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