- Non-Erotic Poetry
- ZMP~ when a dew drop falls ...
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Click hereWhen a dew drop falls?
...that's not it at all!
It races to the edge
of a leaf or a rim
holds for a moment
calculating the wind
Then dives with delight
embracing the splash
the deathly collide
when dew and earth clash
A dew drop understands
and knows natures Art
the smaller it becomes
first risers to heaven
On an early morning mist
lies the secret dew wish
when the sun and earth kiss
arrives the dew drops lift
when a dew drop falls ...
it is racing to heaven!
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>>> 'For the Du' <<<
........(~_~).........
- COMMENTS
clever Art, you have come a long way , baby!
Nin~
BEAUTY ALL AROUND US...thanks for reminding us all of that...
Kisses,
T
Really wonderful way of capturing the essence of a simple dew drop and giving it an existence all its own.
in this piece and a nice compliment to another. and of course it has a few great lines of which has already been covered. nicely done!!....don
of wisdom and has just a hint of graceful as well...really nice pen...*****blue
I read your poetry all the time but rarely comment. loved it my friend...:)
it is racing to heaven!" is the epitome of zen awareness that I have ever contemplated! Art, you never cease to amaze Me with these pearls of nature's wisdom and this is one of your best. The Du {and the rest of us here}have been dewdropped blessed today!<smile>
Vixxx
- like this
"the smaller it becomes
first risers to heaven"
make this poem memorable. Thank you,Uncle MET.
Tess
of a leaf or a rim
holds for a moment
calculating the wind"
I just saw this in the Zen Mountain thread and just realized you posted it as new poem. Sorry I am a little slow ;)
These zen poems, I enjoy. An observation in nature, something so simple has much more meaning if you are aware. And you are, Art. Nice work!
Art, this was very cute and witty, I am amazed by your neverending magic penmanship!
S~