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Click hereAfter rubbing my cock over her clit, I ran it back down her slit until I found her vagina. I pushed forward with my hips and entered her without too much difficulty thanks to her lubricated cunt. She squealed when she felt the end of my cock reach the hilt of her. She moved in motion with me, as I fucked her from behind. I withdrew until my cock nearly came out of her, then pushed it hard back in, as far as it would go. The walls of her vagina were like a toaster and masseuse for my ultra – receptive phallus. Cat was watching intently as my cock entered her.
"Cat, get under her and lick her clit. Let's make her come." I instructed.
Cat positioned herself under Alana's back. I knew she had found her clit because Alana had cried out in bliss and Cat used a hand to massage my scrotum. If I hadn't of ejaculated twice already, I would have easily blown by now. Sophia had Alana by the hair and was kissing her, while she played with her nipples. Alana began to whimper and cry out loud, so I knew she was going to climax. I wasn't ready to do so, so I decided I would just let Alana have her culmination on her own. As her cries became louder the walls of her vagina contracted tightly around me. I pumped into her faster and harder, the sound of skin smacking skin was slightly audible below her cries. One long moan told me that she had just peaked at the height of pleasure. I withdrew, very horny and unsatisfied physically.
"God… I have never had anything like that before," Alana mumbled as she rolled onto her back.
"I want to do it," Cat piped in quietly. Once again, she blushed and nibbled her lip.
"Do what?" I asked.
"You know… have sex."
"Are you sure?" My heart began to flutter.
The one thing I was hoping to do, but never would have asked even if I did have control, was to fuck Cat. I wanted to take her virginity, like her sister had taken mine. But, I definitely didn't want to pressure her into it. I mean, ordering someone to eat their sister out is big, but losing your virginity is sacred. Especially to a Catholic.
"Yes… I really want to." Cat squeezed my hand, gazing into my eyes.
For a moment, as Cat said those words so tenderly, I honestly thought that my feelings for her went beyond intense attraction. For the first time I didn't think of Cat as a beautiful girl with a nice personality, I thought of her as a perfect soul. And I wasn't even religious.
"Ok. Lie down on your back," I lost the tone of command in my voice. I felt myself speaking to her gently and caringly.
She lied down and our eyes did not part once. I knew this was a special moment for both of us. I wanted to make it one she would remember. A benchmark for the other guys that she would meet in her life. She looked so angelic in the candlelight, her golden hair and sky blue eyes made her look like a picture of flawlessness. Her bronzed and spotless skin was an archetype of fineness that most women would strive to attain. Her perky breasts stood proudly out from her chest. Her cute belly button was the centerpiece for her flat, tight stomach, which gave way to her feminine hips. The sight of her fair and soft pubic curls in between her long, slender legs was enough to make any man yearn for just the slightest touch.
I crawled over her body and kissed her red mouth tenderly. Our tongues touched, but only slightly. I kissed her forehead, cheeks and the tip of her nose. I even nibbled on her earlobe before kissing down her long neck.
"Are you ready," I whispered into her ear.
She didn't respond. Instead she smiled faintly and kissed me. Cat put her hand down between us and found my penis. She ran it over her curls and down until it reached her vagina. She positioned it in the opening and let go, placing the hand on my cheek. I used my own hand to help guide my penis into the small hole. She was already considerably lubricated but it was still incredibly tight. I pushed into her about an inch or so. Cat grimaced and let out a small cry of pain.
"Are you alright?" I whispered, genuinely concerned.
She nodded. I kissed her. I shifted my weight forwards and pushed into her again, trying hard not to rush it. I was about two inches inside her. I spread her legs as far as they would go and pushed my lips against hers, bracing her for the final thrust. I pushed in to her again, this time entering the whole way. She cried out softly, but looked in to my eyes and smiled. Her vagina gripped me like a vice. It was an intense feeling. I felt like for that moment that we were a part of each other, that our bodily connection surpassed biology.
I withdrew from her slowly and entered her once again. This time there was still encumbrance, but I managed to get it all the way in, without a cry of pain from Cat. I didn't try to fuck her fast like I did with Alana. Instead, I took my time and did it gently. I lowered my head and kissed Cat's breasts, biting and licking her hard nipples. Her hands circled over my back. As I built up a steady pace, the resistance to my penetrations became less and less. With each slow thrust, Cat was enjoying the experience more and more. She soon started to moan loudly and gyrate her hips below me, which intensified the pleasure enormously. I lay on top of Cat, as our legs intertwined. I wanted us to come together. Not only me and Cat, but all of us.
"Let's try and attempt a four person climax," I offered the girls.
They all agreed. Cat and I kept fucking. I tried to control my potential come by changing the tempo of our thrusts. I turned my head and watched as Alana and Sophia were positioning themselves into a 69, next to us on the bed. I watched intently as Alana and Sophia's body looked like they fit together so perfectly, despite their difference in height. Soon enough, all three girls were either moaning, whimpering or crying out in ecstasy.
"I think I am coming," Alana cried out, as Sophia's tongue danced over her clit.
"I am too," Cat mumbled to me.
Alana's tongue lapped Sophia's clitoris fiercely and I could tell from her heightened cries that she wasn't far off either. So, I picked up rhythm with Cat. Each entrance into her became faster, more intense and more wetter. I didn't need much of an invitation to come. Cat was humming from deep within her. She closed her eyes and bit her lip as I felt a pang of pleasure rise from my genitals. Cat was breathing heavily and screamed out in a real primal sound as I felt a stream of come gather in my testicles. I held Cat's hands and pumped into her as she held her breath and I felt her body shudder beneath me. It was at that precise moment that the build-up of come erupted from my penis and gushed in waves into Cat. The feeling of bliss lasted the longest it had all night and touched the rest of my body in torrents of warm trembles. I buried my hands in Cat's hair hugging her tightly as she arched her back slightly, to accommodate my semen as it entered her.
I heard Alana and Sophia a few moments later as they reached their peaks. Sophia moaned loudly, while Alana shrieked in pleasure. As Alana and Sophia rolled off each other, I lay on top of Cat, still inside her, and we just held each other. I got lost in her enchanting eyes, as I felt her heart pound through my chest. Never in my life had I ever been so intimate with somebody then I was at that moment. Never in my life had I ever imagined that such a bond could be shared between two people. Although I was at the age when I thought that I knew everything, I realized then and there that I had a lot to learn about life.
"Thank you," Cat whispered, smiling.
"For what?" I asked.
"Making me feel special," She said and kissed me lightly.
I finally rolled off her and collapsed next to her, exhausted. Alana and Sophia had already fallen asleep. I closed my eyes and soon fell asleep as well with Cat in my arms, keeping me warm.
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When I awoke in the morning the three girls were already awake, dressed and moving around. The storm had passed. Cat walked into the bedroom and smiled.
"Your friends are going to be worried. I got a signal on my phone so you can call them."
I took the phone and did what she suggested. My friends said they had tried to get in touch with a search team yesterday, but the blizzard had stopped all communication. I told them that I would be back at the ski resort soon and told them not to worry. When I was finished with the phone, Cat took it and called the other girls into the room.
"Let's take a picture." She suggested.
"Do you think that we should Cat? Remember, we can never speak of what happened last night. That goes for you as well," Sophia said looking at me.
If he puts a jacket on, the photo would be innocent." Cat argued.
Alana and Sophia eventually agreed. I put a jacket on and we huddled together on the bed as Cat took the photo on her phone. Sophia got up and walked into the living room leaving me with Alana and Cat.
"Now, lets take a sexy picture," Alana offered grinning devilishly.
She grabbed the phone off Cat and placed one of my hands on her breast and the other on Cat's. She then licked my cheek after telling Cat to do the same on the opposite cheek. Cat did and took the photo. We all laughed. I eventually went outside and checked the conditions. The girls thought that I should wait until afternoon, until the snow melted a bit and they would drive me back to the resort. For the rest of the morning, we all just talked or read. Nothing sexual happened. Sophia made sure of that. The afternoon came and Sophia drove back to the resort. Cat asked for my number and I gave it to her, but I didn't think I would ever talk to them again. I got out of the car and watched them drive away, out of my life.
I am now writing this about a year after the best night of my life. I grew up a lot in the months that followed. At first, I did the guy thing and told my mates everything. Of course, they only laughed when I told them. Who was I kidding? I wouldn't have believed such a story either. My friends' lack of faith angered me at first, but it was about two weeks after the night of firsts, when I got a picture message from Cat. She had sent me both the photos that we took in the morning. This was technically proof of my adventure. But as I looked at the photo of the three of us, I remembered the pact that we had made and felt disgusted with myself for violating the word of three wonderful girls. So I didn't show anybody. Besides, it felt kind of good to just smirk when my friends ribbed me about being so inexperienced. Shows how much they know. So, if anyone reading this doesn't believe me – I don't care… Join the queue.
Now, I usually talk to Cat about once a fortnight on the phone, despite our geography. I found out that we have a lot in common. In fact, I am saving up for another trip to Italy next year. My trip has nothing to do with the possibility of meeting Cat… Honest! She said that we might even be able to stay in her Swiss cabin if I were too come. See… good things really do come to those who wait!
- COMMENTS
I think I had waited too long as nothing ike that has happened ... yet ... then, again, maybe 90 isn't too long. It could have killed me. Nitehawk
I think it's time you wrote more. You have talent. BTW she didn't lied down. She layed down. Lied is for untruths
Far, Far fetched.......you say that it is true. If so you are the luckiest SOB in the entire world.
Utterly ridiculous in a "Dear Penthouse Forum, I never thought this could happen to me..." way.
And I loved it. Grammatical warts and all.
I had to knock off a star for the egregious grammar errors. "If I would of . . ." "So she lied back . . ." They were like dog poop in the chocolate chip cookies.
I just can't comprehend the feeling I got reading this story. I want to thank you so much, I wish I would have heard about the game you play when I was younger. It would have been great. Wow I can still feel this great feeling I got when I read the story when I think about it.
Beautifully written. Loved the story! You’re now one of my favourite authors. Blessings!
Love the story! What a way to achieve manhood! I'd love to hear the sequel, seeing Cat again. I'd be surprised if there isn't more to tell!
Ridiculously unbelievable story, and yet, you never really know, do you?
A late teen virgin male being that good at eating pussy is even more unlikely than him going three times, or three overly gorgeous girls hitting that hard on him ;-)
That bit aside, this story is exquisitely well told. The language handling in what is obviously a secondary language is bordering on virtuoso, and the pace of the story is even better than that. So please WRITE MORE!!!
I liked the story alot but I really have to question your innocent ignorance about the outdoors. No compass, no matches, no GPS...........all that was pretty STUPID. If not for this occupied cabin you would have died.
To the anonymous who said the errors are meaningless and those who focused on them missed the point, the point you are missing is that for some of us an error like "dairy ere" or "lied" when he does NOT mean "fibbed" brings our enjoyment of the story to a screeching halt just as surely as a cold shower. Our brains just simply can't ignore it.
I hope Cat was in the time of the month when she wouldn't get pregnant.
Wonderful story and I was very delighted when I read it. It would be great if you wrote more.
To be the most most unlikely event to ever possibly occur in real life, thereby the most unbelievable story to have ever been told, you certainly tell it with conviction. I'm choosing to believe, albeit jealously.
I loved it, and people throwing tantrums about it being long or 'strictly girl on girl' and 'skipping the whole story', I can only remark "good things really do come to those who wait!"
Patience is a virtue, and although I have been burned by being patient and giving a story a chance, most of the time it is very much rewarding! I would have loved a sequel, too bad you only ever made the one story!
Fantastically silly and over-long, but good fun and quite sexy. Some very amusing and witty comments from contributors!
as soon as they started playing that card game and it was strictly girl on girl i skipped the whole story shit was such a turn off thanks for throwing the story
It was actually a good story but Jesus could you have crafted a more pathetic beta male I mean seriously why not make him blind deaf and blind as well 😂
I've seen this story linked before in the list of "Similar Stories" and was not tempted to read it, but now I'm glad I did! 5*
I'm in agreement with the comment made by Anonymous (2 comments before mine, November/December 2022) about the rosa-blanca.ru; they are stupid! I wonder how this story got linked in the Similar Stories list?! I've seen it in a few other stories and decided not to read them due to the incomprehensible meaning of the rosa-blanca.ru!
Dobbin55
You are bad at rosa-blanca.ru. rosa-blanca.ru should help readers find your story, and help the site recommend similar stories.
Who would ever search for "sophia asked"? "cat orgasm"?!
Suggested rosa-blanca.ru: foursome, mfff, virgin, first time etc. etc.
Still a hot story after all these years, and still in dire need of editing. I try to ignore the flubs.
That was a superb story. It was well written and very erotic! :-p” When I was a teen, there was a girl at my high school that I had a reoccurring fantasy. We were on a high school ski trip (close to where we lived in the Pacific Northwest) and we were skiing together and got lost. We found an unoccupied cabin, there was no heat so we had to get in bed together to stay warm. You can use your imagination to guess what we did. Oh what a night…
You should have made all three girls send him pictures of the pregnancy tests and say congratulations daddy and it’s all of them standing there rubbing there belly’s
Pity its only one story from this talented author. The errors are meaningless, and those who focused on them missed the point. Unless their pleasure is from correcting others' writing, in which case, knock yourselves out. Someone said something about dead authors, I hope that is not the case. It is a very entertaining story. It is not at all easy to write such a common male fantasy and still make it original, interesting, and perhaps best, and I say this as a guy, the emotion he or she managed to make central to the story. The fact that he was so gentle and even loving while being the one to "take her virginity" really made the scene and ultimately the story. Good job.
Was it believable?...who the hell cares its a story and it was great because I know i have had similar fantasies...i say bravo to you author, I thank you for sharing your story.!!
Okay...I am giving this story **5** Stars...because it is a totally great STORY..
I do not care about the length...it is the content of the whole thing.
What a 'coincidence' that MC stumbled onto the cabin at such a critical moment in the blizzard!! And, to find three such beautiful and sexy ladies, who welcomed him into their bed to 'warm up'...BUT THAT IS WHY IT IS A STORY....And I love it!!
The other comments about the grammar, etc are spot on, which I really hate to say. As examples are "more hotter", "just laid there", and "dairy ere" (really, it is derriére)-PLEASE....
Oh, crap...I may be criticizing a member of the "Dead Author's Club"...seriously, I am not being sarcastic...some of you others have commented, & I am...😵😵😪😪😪😕😕😕
Can 'somebody' edit the story for the author?
Wow loved this story! Thx for sharing xx I cum a few tones it was so sexy n erotic so thx ;)
OK, I have to throw a B.S. flag at part of this. One of the characters puts her pussy right on dude's leg and he's like it might just be her culture and I shouldn't let my dick poke out. Culture, really? No. None the less thanks for sharing this story and appreciate your efforts.
Not believable, but quite enjoyable. Some funny errors, though. He wrote, “to rub her all over her dairy ere”, which just caused me to giggle, mid-sex scene. He meant “derrière”, French for backside or ass (if you don’t know the word, don’t fake it!). He also described the head of the penis as “the glands”. Nope. There are glands in the throat (pituitary, for example), but the end of the penis is the glans (again, if you don’t know, either Google it or use a word you do know— please!).
Christ, this really had it all. Definitely the best goddamn thing I’ve read on this site. Thank you for sharing.
You always spread out the DC oats over the top of the blanket if you are relying on body heat to survie.
SS1969
This was the best I have ever read, had me in the mood all the way throw. and you were one very lucky (man).
Definitely 5 stars! Very good story. My only question was what was Sophia's thoughts when Cat was losing her virginity right there in front of her?
Wonderfully written, except for a bit of grammar. And I'm talking from the viewpoint of an author, not a horny person.
The only way this could've been better is if he got Cat pregnant, or at least one of them pregnant. I would've made sure to cum inside all of them multiple times before leaving. A shame Sophia was on the pill. Isn't that against Catholicism?
Just amazing! I sure hope those two get together again. I know I would be cutting out extravagant items like food to get the money for a ticket back! Lol.
All human stories have sex in them… a lot of sex.
But almost all of them have the sex taken out.
doneastwest.
If I could rate this higher than '5' I absolutely would. As high as possible. What amazing writing. Tremendous creativity, and without a doubt, the most erotic writing I have ever read. Not just sexual, but incredibly erotic. In such a short period of time, you managed to create characters with distinct personalities that interacted perfectly. And I loved the way that Cat's first sexual experience was kind, gentle, erotic, sexually incredible, and tinged with love - as much love as can be possible after only knowing someone for that short a period of time. Even though you didn't write it explicitly, the lack of overt reaction from her initially very protective sister clearly implied that she approved - and that is saying something! I could write for hours about how wonderful your work is, but I should probably stop. Suffice to say you are by far the best writer of erotic fiction (I assume!) I have ever read. Thank you for sharing such fine work. Just one more word - about your creativity. To come up with all the actions and interactions, physically, emotionally, and sexually, that occurred between and among those four lovely people was a stunning example of open-minded wild-eyed (in only the best sense) delightful writing. I don't know if you will make a profession of your writing, but I hope so, and I hope you will be rewarded handsomely, beyond the politics and greed of those in the business. You are supremely talented. Thank you.
I gave it a 5 star
First story I have seen on this site with over 1 million views.
Started slow, frustrating, but the climax was awesome. The tenderness between the two virgins was sweet. How many of us were together with girls and wanted nothing less than to have all of them? I wish him the best experience possible in Italy. Thank you!
This is a great piece here and you well deserve all the praise that is being given in all the comments, truly a 5 star experience. But for all that is holy, WHAT ARE THOSE rosa-blanca.ru? The only two rosa-blanca.ru that don't have character names in them are "Mouth Slit" and "Warm Still". Please, I would love to be able to find this story and others like it through rosa-blanca.ru.
I love the story BUT. Don't you just hate that? First comes the believability factor - I struggle here. Maybe 3, maybe 4???. Down the list we come to spelling and the proper use of the English language. The mistakes here were frequent enough to.be troublesome. Lastly is the length factor - too Damn long. Maybe I didn't really love the story after all
If the girls had dressing gowns,why were they not wearing them the first night to try to keep warm.?
I read this story a number of years ago, then lost track of it and where to find it. I was very please to have come across it again as I have thought of this story many times over the years and have enjoyed it in my mind. Thanks for writing it. Excellent!
As to weather/whether or not to use "Proper English" is beyond me. ( Please see below.) What I can reasonably say is that this is not your first story written. It is too well told to be a first attempt. As far as joining the cue of nonbelievers... I'll just add this to my cue of favorites. Five stars
Very Good. Kept me interested throughout.
Pity nothing else has been written by author.
As for the comment by "Anonymous" (ref Sophia & Cat) agree about birth control but when will idiots learn that there is a difference between American English and Proper English. Vice is perfectly correct in the context it was used in when using Proper English. There are authors who use "plowing" which doesn't exist in English - "ploughing" is correct, but Americans have plowing as a slang word.
yes, it sadly has been 15 years. And given the limited information I have, I fear he is dead. The author appears to have made this account for the purpose of posting this story, and this story alone. I would not be surprised if he posted this knowing he would never come back, whether by choice or because he was dying. I shall be adding him to a post on the forums, made to commemorate those among us who have passed, and perhaps those who have disappeared without a trace. If anyone wishes for a link to the post, send me feedback asking for one or find me on the forums.
Considering that the author has written just this one story and it was fifteen years ago (published 02/06/05) there would appear to be little likelihood of there being a sequel to this story, no matter how many people (me included) would like one. Author has no other authors or stories that are liked, minimal information on the author, so you do the math, or just keep hoping. Just don't hold your breath.
As to Anonymous who doesn't like stories that are "waaaay too long" at 7 chapters, well, it is only ONE chapter but seven PAGES. I personally LIKE long stories that are actually STORIES. If all you want is the physical interaction (just assuming that for you, but to each their own) why not just copy the sex scenes into a text file to allow you to get your rocks off each time you repeatedly read it. That would be boring for me, but go ahead and rock your world.
RRC
1 of my favourites, must be continued with a meeting in the swiss cabin, but this time get the fire wood in along with food, then get a snow storm that knocks out the power and emergency radio.
Then let them have fun.
but waaaay too long for me....read first chapter and saw it was 7 chapters long... it gets boring when they are so long...what I read was good though...
So, before he and Sophia fuck, there's a discussion about condoms, the pill, etc. Very responsible, especially considering Sophia is a bit of a bad girl, and has plenty of experience. But when he's going to penetrate Cat, who is the virgin, no discussion? No protection? Have a heart, dude. You think maybe you love this girl a little, she's a 'perfect soul', and you don't even ask Sophia for one of her rubbers? Not cool, man.
Oh, and that thing squeezing your balls is a vise, not a vice.
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Were there some grammatical errors? Yes, but the story was awesome!!
Frigging awesome, looking forward to hearing if him and cat go to a cabin in Italy and get snowed in for 2 weeks. Maybe Sophia, and Alana can come as well, .
I thought the story was good, but there are a few grammar problems: Lay, lie and lain, et cetera are difficult, but 'lied her down' should sound wrong to almost anyone. 'Dairy ere' has already been pointed out. If English is not your first language, then the latter is understandable, but if it is, in fact, your first language then shame on your teachers and your parents. No excuse for 'dairy ere'. A good, albeit hard to believe, story spoiled by some sloppy grammar.
This brings back amazing memories. I love how the story was about love and not just sex. Verry passionate!
Best story ever it made me happy and feel special I love these fantasy stories it gives me hope to ask my crush to be my girlfriend . Thank you for the story please keep going to make it into a book please do
I just reread this story after a few years. I think I enjoyed more this time than the first. A first rate story. Nice job!
Wonderful and hot. This one made me very happy several times. Keep up the great work!
I wish people would enjoy the Fantasy of the stories on this site and leave all the petty bull shit aside
It's fantasy and sexy for us to enjoy
Life has enough negativity without adding to it
This doesn't necessarily mean anything, but this story has a number of typos that are reminiscent of typos made by an OCR program... A printed story is converted into letters and words. For example, "derriere" was translated as "dairy ere."
Great story, though...
First, the date of this story is earlier than the JAB comic. If anyone copied it was jab...or this guy also writes for JAb.
Second, wonderful story with just enough plausibility to make it semi possible. Maybe not the supermodel part but who knows. I loved the card game and wished it would have lasted one more round.
Also, I wish he had been less of a jerk and not told his friends.
My biggest gripe was he emphasized what a religious man their father was, but he had two daughters with two different women! A simple explanation about him being a widower or something would have improved story continuity.
Overall I enjoyed the story. I'll even overlook how a virginal boy could last so long getting his first fuck from a supermodel after being stimulated all night...lol. The kid was a quick learner in the pussy eating arena. Again, a great story.
People saying this is a copy from JabComix, note the date that this was published (2005) and then reference the link below. You will notice that this was written before Jab released their comic.
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This story has been here since February of 2005, a "long time ago" in the online world. I'm pretty sure someone would have mentioned it back then if this were a copy of someone else's work, and I don't see any such in the earlier comments.
this story was written by someone else, I read this story long time ago, if you want to write do your own writing and don't copy someone else's work. the story is a good read, it just a shame you copied it from someone else. don't try to take credit for other peoples stories.
I'm almost certain the JABComix version of this story wasn't around when this story was posted almost 12 years ago.
This is not so much for the writer, as it is for the audience:
You guys do realize that this story is copy and pasted from another site, right? The original story belongs to JAB Comix, and whether it was intentional or not, this story is ripped/copied.
You can look up JAB Comix (dot) com and Find this as A Blizzard and a Night of Firsts. />
It is probably copied for those who like reading and don't want illustrations, but it's better to give credit to the original artist (even though this is a good read).
First, I enjoyed your story quite a bit, just a few things I wanted to comment on. While even he acknowledged it himself, he was a jackass by telling his friends like that, very stupid and annoying. I also wish we could've had a slightly extended / different ending, instead of simply talking to her once a fortnight a year later, it'd have been nice to say something instead like "a year later and here I am in Italy with my girlfriend Cat while she, her sister and friend attempt the arduous task of teaching me Italian while trying not to laugh too hard at my flawed attempts." While the potential is there since it's an open-ended ending, I would've preferred a bit more progress but that's me lol. Still an enjoyable read. ~F.F.
actually it was four all together in a snow drift - - - of sorts. Wow, they did have fun when snowed in together. and equaled five stars.
There is no "would of, could of, wouldn't of, couldn't of" several other basic errors too. Also...loved mountaineering but got lost....seriously?
You have already lost credibility by the time the card game begins.
Four people. All that time? No one got hungry? No one used the bathroom?
Etcetera. The nuts and bolts of reality were forgotten.
You also waited too long to reveal the change in room temperature.
Also: "of" not "Off"...and "derriere"...
After a while it all became gymnastics.
read the story whilst looking at the pictures in Jabcomix
could picture all the details
Well written, well edited, believable characters. Had me hooked from start to finish! Would love to read one about couple swapping by you.
Wonderful story about three beautiful girls in a Cabin and you just happened to get lost and being cold . Plus finding this Cabin with three sexy beautiful girls just go with the flow i say . BRAVO GOOD STORY .
Bloody good story, just one correction I noticed you made a few times. The past tense of lie isn't lied when talking about lying down, it's lay. That is all, just thought you'd want to know.
Great fantasy of sexual powers. Guess by the girls as well as the lucky male. For those who are critical, stop reading after a few lines instead of reading the story and making belittling remarks. There is a key to drop off a story. I find the comments fun and enjoyable to read and the story was exceptional enough to rate five stars.
Who are these Sherlocks who keep saying how great the story is and how talented the author is? - I had to skip segments of the cliché'd story to finish it. (See how hard stuff like that is to read. Now imagine asking someone to read 7 pages of it.)
While this is a very good story, it is the only one by "the_last_high" and was submitted over 10 years ago in Feb 2005.
I would be very surprised to see "the_last_high" submit another story regardless of all the praise, encouragement, and begging being done in this comment section.
I would love to experience this girls
Email me if you want to make this happen
By the way i dont check email that often
Can't say I've ever read a story as well written in Literotica. Actually nothing comes even close. You have the skills to move beyond this genre of writing if you choose. Don't concern yourself with spell checking, move up the ladder and employee an editor. If you do this just for fun and have no concern for cash flow, thanks for a great story.
The slow and steady pace of the story is so good that once erected it keeps on. Extremely entertaining. Keep it up.
It's either you are the best porn writer in the world or that story is true. And if 1/10 of that story is true. Wow. That would be wonderful.
Need to use 'laid' instead of 'lied'. I loved the slow crescendo. A good story teller.
I am forced to agree with the comment about spelling and proofreading. Several "of" where "have" or " 've" should have (should've) been used, or in some cases where the word didn't belong at all. That being said, I still gave it a 5, just for the sheer eroticism of it all. I'm assuming it was typed in a "stream of consciousness" fashion, so I'm not too judgmental. I hope there is a lot more to come. Just remember there is no substitute for roofpreading. ;)
That was one of the best stories I read on literotica .I think you should write script for porn
If absolutely any of this is true and I mean any of it just congrats man I fell for u
Our hero was a very quick learner. I'm a bit jealous, I've already had two cigarettes, and its time for a nap. What an exhilarating way to get stuck in a storm. Warming my boys by a nice warm fire, well maybe next time. The girls took the first hard wood they got their fingers on.
Thanks for a delicious story
*~*
A little too fabulous to be true, but a good story. Please do a better job of editing. "Dairy ere". Please. How about derriere? Would it really have taken that long to check?
Beautiful story, fiction or not, loved it.
Will you ever write more, of anything?
Something tells me that this did really happen, but if so, then you have violated her trust once again. Unless given explicit permission and had the names change.
If ir wasn't real, you certainly know how to tell a VERY possible scenario. If it is real, you did a DAMN GOOD job in the flow of events that took place. Very well detailing.
It took me forever to read. But a damn good read.
A fantabulous fantasy! Good story, good reading, good writing. Danka! Cheers!
I hope to be seeing more of your stories in the future.... Your first one is great!
This was a great story of an adventure all males and women would love to participate in.
intense sensuality and some unintended humour
you have to watch out for those darn cows and the mistakes they make
"This inspired me to rub her all over her dairy ere," lol
So fucking good! Really hot. There's a whole series of stories waiting to be written about just the card game they played.
So did Alana suck his cum out of Sophias pussy? She should have shared..LOL
I first read this in the JAB-illustrated comix version. A hot tale, even without pictures. Extremely hot! I'm surprised it's the author's only entry here.
I don't give a flying fuck if it really happened or not! And if it did, jesus christ dude you really are god! But if it didn't, your imagination and writing skills are awesome!
Favorite story! and Favorite author!
I completely agree with 'Vacc'. The story is one of the best I have come across
Have you considered continuing the story?
I would really like to read a threesome with the sisters!
This was easily a 5. If you ever do another story though, please run the manuscript through a grammar checker. "You" is not spelled "u" and there were a number of other mistakes which might have been caught. None of them took away from the story but each of them caused me to pause as I was reading -- sort of like hitting a pothole while driving.
I liked the way you constructed your protagonist. It gets tiresome reading stories where all of the protagonists have dicks the size of two Coke cans stuck together at the ends, can cum 12 times in succession and are muscled up with washboard abs and a caring personality.
the_last_high is the Original Author.
Jab Comix credits says:
Artist: Jaguar
Story: the_last_high
I read the illustrated version of this on another site. Jab Comics. jabcomix.com
I hope it yours and not stolen. Not cool to submit someone else's work. I liked the illustrated version better
When you abandoned his character innocence, it became too calculated.
MAJOR disbelief when His choice is not his erection being NEXT!!!
(Note: No S for TOWARD or FORWARD. Ever.)
This story is an absolute beauty, I have never read something similar to this. All the intensity, originality and passion flowed throughout the story. Nevertheless, it is obvious that you're a 'lucky guy' and we all envy you.
You are, in my books, truly, the luckiest man alive.
Long, describing, atmospheric, intimate, wonderful!!! The best story i have ever read! Very good job!!!
If you made a pact to not tell anybody, than why did you right this?
"stolen from Jab Comics without any acknowledgement...what a bitch"
It's not stolen, you'll see this was written 7 years ago, and the Jab Comic credits 'the_last_high' for the story
All though the characters do flip flop a lot, I thought it was very unique and interesting! I like how everything was covered, anything you could have wanted was in the story! I didnt connect to the boy at all, but all the girls were very interesting and I found their love triangle fascinating. I think the male character could have been drop and this story would have gone a lot better!
I really enjoyed this story though, nothing went untouched!
This story reads like a mathematical equation. It's a list of events in a specific order. There's no real emotion, no feeling. Your descriptions are all analytical. The main character doesn't see the beauty of things; doesn't appreciate his surroundings.
I don't know about the rest of the readers but when I care about someone, I get jealous. You've got the best friend who has lusted for years and the over-protective sister who finds Cat attractive. Between the two of them, there's no room for the male character. This could have easily turned into a lesbian three-way w/ the guy sitting on the side-lines stroking his dick.
There were major inconsistencies in Sofia's behavior. One minute she's discouraging, the next she's encouraging. Of the three females, Alana seems like the most likely to be vocal about her own pleasure. "Uh guys, little help?" And Cat went from blushing virgin to nympho back to blushing virgin. Your main character went from afraid to touch them to telling the two sisters to kiss and fondle. Continuation is powerful in a story like this. Keep them all in character and you can build drama and suspense. As soon as your characters start "flip-flopping", you've dropped all pretense of plot and you might as well have your characters humping from the start.
If you want to facilitate the deeper emotions, you need to drop the whole 4-some thing and focus on two characters. Next time, snow in 2 people and let them work through their angst; it'll be a much more entertaining read. 3/5
great story i really hope you do meet cat and maybe fall inlove since you both seem perfect together!
He only came in Sophia & Cat so there is only a small chance of a baby. Alana came before he was able to.
It's the kind of fantasy every red-blooded male would like--three beautiful, hot, naked women to share a bed with.
Very few of us would ever encounter a situation described in your story, but we can dream, can't we? And if we ever did have such an encounter, would we survive it?
Great story. Thanks for posting.
What a lovely long drawn out story of foreplay. The climax brought back memories of giving up my own virginity. Very arousing well done
Very creative. You should write more, whether it's erotic, in content, or not.
So he had sex with three girls from Italy/France without using protection. If you dont already know this France and Italy are both catholic nations.
Being catholic they cant use any birthcontrols. Im sure there are some people there who use it but they are fairly liberal. And considering what you wrote about there father and her parents I dont think they were that liberal.
I can remember you wrote that Sofia were on the pill but I dont recall you writing anything about the others. And considering what I have mentioned earlier I think that it is a very real possibility that at least one baby could have been consumated there.
And just that you know catholics doesnt do abortions either
The Ski Lodge can result in some interesting sex. At age 25 took first trip from New Orleans to Aspen. In a week I had great sex with 3 women - only one I had known casually before. Two story comments. Few 18-year old virgin males could service 3 in one night. Also story had little conflict. Seems all would be OK from the beginning. BUT overall a fun story.
CajunBill
I was able to hold my own till the very end, and I do think this is one of the best stories I've ever read. However...Sophia, Alana and Caterina, two of which being from Italy...Anything sound familiar, people? If not, play Assassins Creed II. Not that I have a problem with that! Just on observation I made. I understand completely if you used the names and locations for privacy purposes. If it WAS from AC II, Nice reference, good sir! And please, do tell if you ever see little Cat again. Thank you!
A lot of people question whether this story truly happened. I can say (from my knowledge of winter-camping) that it would indeed be cold enough at first in the cabin for these ''extreme'' mesures to be necessary. Over the night, it would get more comfortable, unlike what someone else in the comments thought. About the being lost in the woods and miraculously finding the cabin, unless there was a trail to follow or the cabin was lit, that was embellishing the original story. Other personal experience about the woods, being secluded like that does have an impact, you are indeed less shy than you would normally be.
One thing that makes me skeptical though, is that the girls said that story was supposed to be between the four of you and never leave these woods. Either you betrayed them, switched their names, or just made it up.
That was quite remarkable, I am truly amazed. This is honestly the best literature that I have ever read.
I enjoyed this story and only wish my own first time had been like this, not that mine was boring! Personally speaking I would think it was great either way round and there is no reason who non-monogamous or Polyamarous parings should be any less special or significant than single ones. They can be just as intimate and from the sounds of things Cat has strong feelings towards her half-sister, so there is no reason it couldn't be a pleasant memory. Well done.
That was honestly so amazing. I've made it my goal to finish reading this with out completely creaming my pants... haha, great story, I truly am in awe!
I loved it, although it was very long it kept my interest and I had to finish reading, now it's late and I'm going to bed and dream of eating three beautiful women and making them cum, I would dream of fucking them but that would really be only in my dreams as I can't get up like I did when I was younger.
OH well I can dream, can't I ?
Not bad and it's possible that it's true although it seems like the writer was using a dictionary while composing it. However if it did really happen the chances of a loving long term relationship with Cat are not great. I mean she will remember that her first meeting with him involved sex with two other women one of whom was her sister. It's not exactly making her seem special if your first sexual experience with her is as part of a four-way romp. This will always be in the back of her mind imagine if the situation was reversed and it was three guys and one girl. How would he feel?
An actual story for once, loved it. Its not just sex sex sex. Its not believable but really who gives a fuck it was good. Really want a squeal, however it would be very hard to achieve.
Great story! This one actually has a plot and all the elements of a short story, unlike other writings on this site. Do continue to write more. Sometimes people want a nice story, not necessarily here for all the raunchy fucking and such.
I can see you're the type of person that has a miserable life, so to help you get through it. You go around criticizing other ppl hard work trying to make them feel as low as you do. Who really cares if its real or fake? It was a great story. I can't wait for the comic to get done, so I can read it again.
Let's face it, we all want to think that could have happened. It's every guy's fantasy. But it most assuredly did not happen. Three beautiful young women inviting a strange young man into their bed naked? Not buying it. Young virgin man not blowing his load within the first minute of said naked young woman stroking him? Not buying it. Your story writing skills are exceptional though. I kept reading through the pages and the initial scenarios, but once you got to Sophia and anal/oral, just gross and unbelievable that a virgin would ever think to do something like that. Combine that with the inexplicable savy in pleasuring all 3 women in different ways . . . kept further stretching from any semblance of believability so I just scanned the last few pages bored. You can't make it so unbelievable that you lose your audience.
you are one of the most luckiest guys I will never know, and you know what this inspired me to do something adventurous with my life thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If this story is real,the u should call cat nd should exprees ur damn feelings.its high tym that u do it
I don't know if this is a true story or not, if it is just a story it is very brilliant, it is very descriptive and paints a great image in ones mind. If this is a true story I really do think that you fell in love with cat, and if you ever see her again I think you should tell her, hell you never know it might just work.
Excellent character development. By the end of the story, I felt I knew them all. I really enjoyed the gradual progression of the increasing level of trust and then intimacy. I look forward to reading much more of your work.
That was absolutely brilliant.
Keep writing.
The length did not matter and I quickly forgot about spelling mistakes.
A tip do not try and use words you do not use naturally. Be yourself.
Very,very good story.i really enjoyed reading it,best story on this site.keep them coming ....
A well written story with good characters. I really enjoyed the card game the best, what an interesting way to score.
Wonderful story. The sexual details were exquisite. The writing was polished. All four characters were clearly characterized, and their reactions were genuine. I loved how you vividly described each girl. And of course this is just about the ultimate fantasy. This should be a standard for erotic stories. Keep it up!
Man, I too am a virgin. I betcha that this is any virgin's dream!!!
Awesome man ;)
After reading this I thought that it was amazing, but after thinking about it, it became a God-like masterpeice, it shows that we average guys can meet people and be loved... and have a bit of naughty love ;)
I honestly think that this story might even be true though I doubt it, if it is though then congratz dude at finding love after almost freezing to death.
Keep it up. This is one of the best I've read. You made it seem very honest.
You should (as suggested above) keep writing and publish. There was plenty of good sex details without getting into pain or other not quite so pleasant stuff. For sure, keep on writing. I have been reading porn and salacious stories since the fifties, I can tell a really good story when I read it.
You made me feel that I was there... with those three women... amazing.... you have a real gift of writing. Well done!
Do yourself a favor. Get an editor, find a publisher, and go make some serious cash. You have a gift.
Dude, what an amazing story told so well. I especially like it because your first paragraph completely described ME! We are/were very similar indeed and thats what got me reading. Love it!
Btw... what year did you write this?
man this was a great story.someday i'm gonaa make a real movie out of it..
:D
you have a great talent .
Whatever the veracity of the tale, I choose to believe it as it vicariously satisfies a host of my fantasies. A (last) high-5 to you, dude. Well done!
Great story. Wish that could happen to me. There were small mistakes, however. For example, "I could sense that Cat was close too coming". The "too" should be a "to". Another mistake was in the fourth paragraph of the fourth page. A word is repeated. The mistakes stifle my reading. Beside that, the work is a masterpiece.
Bah! To be honest it was really, really great!
Passionate, tender and enchanting at least.
I liked his point of view at the end and of course I envy him ... ;-)
This is quite, AMAZING, not only an excellent way to get off but a great read on its own.
this is the best erotic story i have ever read..so wish u would write more..i take my hat off to u
salute sir, i return to this epic piece time and again. respect in unmeasured quantities
you just wrote one of the best movies of all time if only holywood could flim it as well as you wrote it
Easily one of thr finest piece of writing on this site
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Well done.
If I could have given a score higher than 5, you'd have DEFINITELY gotten it!!!
What a story! detailed, written with love, feeling, emotion...
Why shouldn't it be true, especially being your only story, and as you put so much in it?
An amazing story like this cannot be made up even by the most vivid of imaginations. i fully believe you and salute you. not many men are so deviously lucky.
This story is truly stunning, both beautifully written and emotionally stirring (among other things.;)..)
The characters are wonderfully described and developed and the setting only added to the atmosphere of an excellent story.
so thanks from (I imagine) everyone who has read this story.
story was amazing to say the least. Loved the detail you put into the story as a whole. And I believe you. Hope you get to see cat again.
The ending makes it seem like it's a true story. Is it? Stupid question maybe but whatevs. Amazing story.
but, it seemed as though for an 18 year old who had never been kissed before he seemed a little demanding of these women......
don't get me wrong though, it was incredible
Amazing story! A great read.
On a small side note, i love when people comment on here about "grammar and spelling" and can't even spell correctly themselves. Don't take their "reviews" seriously. If they can't type a five sentence comment without messing up, how can they have the right to criticize a 7 page story?
best story eva!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant beleive this
will you make another one of these storys?????
Extremely hot!! Loved it and u do a very good job at describing it.I believe you but I think you exadurated a bit on all the horny-ness and was it just chance that all the girls where bi-sexual?Overall a very good story =)
You started off well enough with some good ideas, but tried to cram far too much into it. In doing so, the story lost its appeal. I quickly became bored with the non-stop sex.
Your grammar and spelling aren't very good. You need to work on both of them a lot more.
You try to describe too much detail. Sometimes less is more. And you need to encourage the reader to use his or her imagination. Don't try to do too much.
One minute all four of them were huddled under blankets trying to warm each up, and then the next minute the boy and one of the girls are on top of the blankets. This was not plausible, because in real life, the temperature would have been well below freezing, and both of them would have suffered hypothermia within a very short time.
Ah hell, hot, but obviously just a story. Amazing how an inexperienced virgin over the years had learned not to touch a clit without lubrication. A few other places where the protagonist showed experience rather than inexperience, but still a Great Fantasy.
This is the best story I have read on this site. Period.
Your story is awesome and an inspiration to virgins everywhere, even though the rest of us will never be that lucky
All I can say is, you lucky bastard. I believe you though. Someone has to, right?
Excellent story, but what kind of dimwitted women go out into a cabin in the middle of winter and don't bring extra blankets, covers, pajamas, etc.? Especially considering they must know full well what winters in the Alps are like, since they live in Europe! Maybe if it had been a cabin full of American girls, I'd believe it, but come on.
This story is obviously not based on reality. But thanks for telling a story that is exactly like my best fantasy. For that, I still give it 100%
Nicely told...three gorgeous girls...sex every which way...BUT...no way in HELL does an 18 year-old cock stay soft for longer than 10 seconds when it finds itself in bed with naked, attractive females...not even in San Francisco, LOL
This was almost without a doubt the best story I have read on this site, perfect sensuality and humour, the contrast of characters was fluid and subtle yet so clearly perfect to the very core, I wish that I could write as well as you. Finally, I really look forward to reading any further submissions from you, fantastic!
This was almost without a doubt the best story I have read on this site, perfect sensuality and humour, the contrast of characters was fluid and subtle yet so clearly perfect to the very core, I wish that I could write as well as you. Finally, I really look forward to reading any further submissions from you, fantastic!
This is one of if not the best bit of literotica that I've read in a long time. From begining to end it just pulls you in leaves you both hot, horny and wanting more. I'm hoping that the_last_high makes a continuation of this.
Honestly the best story i have ever read! The fantasy is at its best and is everybodys dream! Also, to bring about the emotion of love yet in a truly amazing sex scene gives a great feeling of being dirty and yet truly innocent love!
I am so impressed- this was by far the best Literotica story I have ever read. The combination of sensuality and lust with a little dash of emotion was flawlessly balanced. I'm not surprised you haven't written another one; this must have taken quite a while and it would be hard to top it. Fantastic work!
A SUPER READ! Whoa! I'm exhausted. Even when I was 18 this level of fantasy would have been beyond me. And I did know a supermodel, too. Thanks for a GREAT STORY!! Winter and the mountains are heaven to me, too.
This is the best story I've read on this site to date! Fantastic work!
This is one of the most well written stories I have read on Literotica. I would recommend it for anyone who enjoys a good erotic story. Well done!!!!
This story is by far the best story I have read on this site. I am having to read it in parts because I want to savor every erotic minute of it. Please write more :)
what a great story, not crude but sensual, not smutty but erotic, flowing description and incredible sensual tension. Thank you!
I came 3 times reading this, with my husband sleeping behind me on the bed!
Whew~!
Out of the many first-time stories I've read here, this is BY FAR the best. Fiction or not, it's an excellent, excellent piece that you should be very proud of. Every guy's fantasy come true!
Out of the countless number of submissions I've read on this site, this is by far the most memorable. Fluent discription, perfect imagery, and an uncanny ability to make the characters spring to life before our eyes. I could imagine myself in your shoes (or lack thereof) throughtout the entire story. If there were more stories like this there would simply be no reason for porn. Thank you for letting us experience your dream come true.
Wow, that's all i have to say. This was by far THE single best story i have ever read in my life. It slowly developed the characters without seeming to drag on and on like some of the other stories that are 7 pages long. You had me captivated from the get-go. Some say, oh this is fake, if it is man, i would love to have your imagination...LOL and if it's not you've got three hot, beautiful, exotic ladies that you keep in touch with...need i say more.Even if this was a personal expirence, it takes a special person to blend the words together the way you do, a seemingly fluid transition from page to page, more importantly adding the personal realistic perspective of the entire expirence. All in all, MINDBLOWING!!! I wish the scale went higher 101/100
I have spent a lot of time reading on this site and this is one of the BEST submissions i have ever read i tend to like the longer stories because it gives you time ot get to know the characters and usually the sex scenes are better. great job 5 stars!
I can verify that this story was totally true - I was the next person to lodge in that cabin, and you guys left it in a terrible state - crisp packets and pizza boxes everywhere, I'm shocked.
A good story - but your right, I don't believe it is true
I couldn't help but rubbing my clit through the whole thing. It was amazing!!!
WOW! I couldn't resist rubbing my pussy to gushing satisfaction during this read. Truly, your story was excellent!
I wanna be stranded somewhere now! but i have a feeling such luck is rare... Write more!
That was clearly one of the best submissions on the site and I've read a lot of them. Masterfull storytelling that keeps the reader spellbound throughout. I tend not to read many of the longer submissions, because they have a tendency to drag. This story has the perfect blend of passion, plot and beautiful character development. You managed a great story out of a very limiting setting. I would suggest a sequel, but unless you can replicate this powerfull performance, don't ruin it like many authors here have.
that was m master peice. i have read bestselling novels that werent as well writen and articulate as that. you are officialy the best author on this site bar none, Fact.
man , this was kool .
Njoyed it emmensley
My keyboard is a mess.
Thx
Awesome read! Very well written, with an abundance of rich words. Only one point I would like to point out... I am french , english and german, and would just like to correct you on one point: "Dairy ere". Correctly, it is written "Dèrrière". Other then that, the best read I've had on this website!
Kudos to you,
Cheers,
Martyn
It was good, but when you think about it, if this actually happened, wouldn't you be breaking their word by posing the story for all to read?
this is without doubt the best story i have ever read... omg i came 7 times reading it.. fucking amazing, man!
Amazing story, I really liked the 1st person perspective. The words you used to describe were very elequent, you do have a career in writing to be sure.
I also liked the end, the bonds that actualy formed added a nice touch(no pun intended).
i enjoyed the story very much...dunno if i believe you or not..i mean three girls!! lol
errrm, whats your phone number plz..hehe ;)
so you preferred Cat all the way seemingly..ciao!
Awesome job man, I really liked it and hope you write more maybe a sequal? Also you have to be one of the luckiest men on this planet!
Extremely good story but 7 long pages!
great though please write more you have talent!
it was good no doubt but long. soooo long. i did find myself skipping parts but once i read the whole thing, i had to look back at it and just go wow. that was good.