by TheHessian
As Artie Johnson on Laugh-In once and frequently said---"VERRRRY Interesting".
Loved it! Family orgies are always fucking hot! The twist at the end was awesome! Five stars and a favorite point!
First, I like your writing style. Second, I appreciate the fact that you don't rush things
I had a funny feeling that the parents were also siblings.
Hopefully there will be a sequel!
Sublime; This is one of my favorite genres . Where families just get it on, without all the guilt.
good story but it came across rushed to me. a but more character development and buildup would have sent it over the top
Stopped reading when they began to smoke.
Regrettably you seem to have females smoking as a constant in your stories., probably some hang-up of yours. For many of your readers, though, it's a total turn-off.
loved it. Will someone please tell this ASSHOLE anonymous to stay the fuck out of slamming stories. I have read sooooo many good hot stories and ALWAYS in the comments is this constant ASSHOLE anonymous who is such a coward that he/she can't even be identified, trashing the writer.
Put up or shut the fuck up, why don't YOU write a story and put yourself on the line you fucking coward.
Great story. Can't see where a sequel can be done without bringing in more protagonists which I'd love to see. 👍 ⭐