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Click here"I was falling...."
"Yeah, falling, and every time I was the one catching you. But then you're falling again. I could only catch you so many times."
"One less time than required," Rosa shoots back bitterly, "No. You wanted out, Aidan, you wanted to escape from your crazy, broken wife. You wanted to justify that to yourself. Well, looks like you got what you wanted."
The phone slips from his ear and he finds himself watching the tide surge in between the rocks, white foam bubbling over honey-coloured sandstone.
"Rosa," he gasps.
His vision blurs with tears.
"I... I gotta go," he croaks, "See ya."
Aidan ends the call. His phone hangs uselessly in his hand. He's sitting on a beach on his own, a long way away from the woman he's always loved, that he misses terribly. Rosa's angry at him. She's still stuck in the mind games, finding someone else to blame. Aidan feels foolish now, for believing that the woman he knew so intimately would have responded any other way. He's staring down at his feet, feeling dampness running down his cheeks.
It's like a physical pain now, after the call, just like the day that he packed up and fled their apartment, the last time he ever saw her. Sitting alone on the rocks in the slanted light of the afternoon sun he can picture her achingly beautiful face as clear as if she's standing right in front of him. All of a sudden, it's too much to bear. He curls up, gasping as the waves of pain pass through him now, waiting for it somehow to pass, the tears streaming for the first time since he left.
Aidan had set out on his own to try and make sense of his life, but somehow he's gotten himself lost. For the first time, he begins to fear that maybe it's too broken, maybe there's no way back.
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[Next chapter: Aidan learns about fame: how you become famous, and how you stay that way. She reveals more of herself.
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- COMMENTS
Found this story on LW 3 days ago...didn't comment on the first 4 ch just giving 4 to 5 points !
Very very good is all I can say..
I was hoping they could work this out, but after this loose her phone number forever. She could be the most screwed up person in any of the many stories I have ever read. I say move on forever it hurts but he would be better off. Thankfully she didn’t get pregnant you would be stuck dealing with this psycho forever.
Excellent as usual! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS and thank you.
This is so good I only momentarily wondered what was up. Each word, phrase, sentence just works. Go, Sam, go!
Yeah sorry. Makes a lot more sense with chapters in the right order. Hope I can get that fixed
Loving this story and of course the characters, however I hate the jumps between chapters it feels like a book with some missing pages, I much prefer the journey from A to C to include B. It just feels like a whole chunk is missing between this and the last chapter. Still looking forward to the next chapter in spite of that.
How many chapters are there and are they all written yet? So far so good but the Rosa confrontation is what is keeping me reading. Hope it is soon, this is getting a bit predictable. 5/5
There needs to be some inkling of what is going on between Aiden and Rosa. Alluded to here but not teased out. Getting frustrating, TBH.
Agreed with anonymous, you're missing a chapter for sure. I'll wait for that then catch up.