All Comments on 'A Special Night with Mom'
by notewrite4
- 17 Comments
Good job, nice and simple. Mike is right, feels like a new beginning. looking forward. Tnx
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Overall, quite nice. A few issues with phrasing, e.g. "My hands went to the back of her to hold her in place." The back of her what? I know it infer "back of her head," but it throws the flow of the story off. There are also a few cumbersome turns of phrase, that act as verbal (which doesn't mean spoken, just means having to do with words) potholes.
But, again, overall a very pleasant read that begs for a follow up story, "It's been two weeks since my mother and I made love as a one time, never-to-be-mentioned event..."
A GREAT start! Hopefully, your next chapter will expand their sexual horizons, even though the mom said "Tonight I want you to spend the night with me in mommy's bed. For tonight only, you and I will have sex. Nobody can ever know, and tomorrow we have to agree to never speak of this again."
Possibly, when she wakes next to him the following morning, she can't resist stroking his 'morning woodie' and when he wakes, she confesses that she can no longer deny her longing for him. During what becomes their ongoing relationship, some of their pillow talk could include a discussion about how long the mom had attempted to refrain from seducing her son, but her masturbation efforts were no longer satisfying her sexual cravings and she had to have him penetrate her. -- Just a suggestion. 5 ***** for your effort thus far. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
can review just how this mother and son relationship
A beautiful start, they both fell in love and will be lovers from that moment, Pete will move to his fathers or his own place, so mom and Mike can be together all the time, more soon, please! 5 stars!
Ha, she'll need more of her Sons' young hot cock. Eventually Pete will catch them, and join in. Mommy will be sandwiched between two horny young men that will fuck her several times daily, and she'll love it. Five stars, but please continued.
Loved the story she said only for tonight but there should be more of this story with their sex to continue!! And why is a 24 year old son and an older son still living with their mother ??? 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it but why is two older boys still living with their mother and the oldest staying weekends with his father?? Continue and see if they have more sex 5 stars
Good story. Realistically speaking, mom wanted it from the start maybe even before the son. Like, getting jealous/possessive when there wasn't even any flirting is kinda hard to explain otherwise. So is basically asking for a night cap.
Nothing wrong with that, although now I have to wonder why. Usually though, the reason is the dad isn't banging her enough and she somehow found her son attractive. It could still be that, since they appear to divorced.
Someone commented it's weird adult sons stay with their parents. But in this age, it's kinda believable young adult still stay with their parents for economic reasons; it's actually kinda common in other cultures although for USA folks it's probably a relatively new (or perhaps returning) phenomenon.
Like most stories in Literotica it kinda needs a sequel. But I guess this might have been meant as a short sweet story. It seems it hit the mark, sadly meaning probably no chapter 2 ever.
Still it was a nice read. The maybe could've been more sex, or at least more explicit/hardcore sex scene. But I think it's more of an attempt at a romance type rather than a porn/stroke story. But in that case, some more context or background for the protagonists, especially the mom would have been nice.
Overall, nice read. Good decision to keep