All Comments on 'After Hours'

you are a very good writer, just sorry there were only 2 pages to this one, hope you write about their date to the opera, bet it will be a very good story as well

There's nothing like a twist in the tail to make a good short story even better. Another nice piece of work, Ann---your tales are coming so thick and fast now it's getting to be a struggle to find enough words of praise.

It is a pleasure to see you on Literotica. I used to read you on ASSTR.You have not lost your touch. You still make me stiff as a board.

Ann , hope you don't mind my title being one of your stores title, but again another good writing in deed. You seem to write out your own fantasies

What a fantastic twist! Your writing is so worth the binge!

One anomaly; How did she get rid of the bra?

That was such a great twist at the end. I liked how this developed, keeping a certain mystery to it alongside the eroticism.

........... an absolutely unexpected ending!!!

I must admit I had sort of expected the almost predictable "May - December romance" type story, but the twist at the end ........... just wow.

Yet another really good story for your fans to enjoy.

Thanks Ann

Takes me back to my girls boarding school d system 💦🌈💕

Hot! With a twist!

Perfect!! I don't think anybody saw that twist coming. Unless they are psychic. :)

Great story.

Absolutely incredible and my word that twist!?! I was ready for a bittersweet ending the the flip was just masterful.

Good twist to end it.

Shiver!